storm

acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited April 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the rain came
rain's gone

it did rain
and I heard a storm

with the wind came
something warm

so much
has come and gone
God I miss the storm

I no longer know
if I’m well
there’s a sinking
in my head
I believe

…I’m well
she was a storm
she left
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    the rain came
    rain's gone

    it did rain
    and I heard a storm

    with the wind came
    something warm

    so much
    has come and gone
    God I miss the storm

    I no longer know
    if I’m well
    there’s a sinking
    in my head
    I believe

    …I’m well
    she was a storm
    she left

    and that was quite a warm
    thing to read
  • i stole storm from stevie... she says it with... grace... hear her ... half half
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Love your poem,

    I've been thinking about Stevie Nicks song - Storm - with all the rain we've been having here... ;)

    " I have always been a storm "
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  • i love what you've said mika..thanks

    stevie nicks goes well with the rain..so enjoy the rain.. and the storms : )

    "I'd like to leave you wth something warm"..
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    this one punched me right in the gut,I've had it on my mind for a while now,it just took me back about 10 years and stirred up old memories but I 'm lucky because my storm woulden't leave me.
    as always Brother great writing, you put thoughts into words so well.

    Godfather.
  • Godfather... what sincere words... you're too kind...

    but you too gotta dig a bit of stevie nicks man ! ... I'm losin my mind or somethin...but fuck it .... cuz my mind's overrated ...
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Godfather... what sincere words... you're too kind...

    but you too gotta dig a bit of stevie nicks man ! ... I'm losin my mind or somethin...but fuck it .... cuz my mind's overrated ...

    are you kidding ? Stevie Nicks..I'd drag my naked butt thru broaken glass just to hear her say my name...on the phone :lol:
    I'll bet you're very intelligent,knowing what little I know and the words you write tell me that there is something
    more than this confusion you talk about "there's a storm brewing Bro" use what you have to understand it and know that it's a cool thing, over rated ? I hardly think so Brother.כמו אלוהים יכול לומר,"אי לא נותנים לכם יותר אפשר לטפל"

    Godfather.
  • Godfather. wrote:
    are you kidding ? Stevie Nicks..I'd drag my naked butt thru broaken glass just to hear her say my name...on the phone :lol:
    Godfather.

    ahh shit yes... that's what I wanted to hear... i couldn't have said it any fuckin better... yes I believe I too would drag my naked butt through broken glass just to hear her say my name... and yeah... on the phone....

    i was just tellin my sister that when I listen to Eddie i think about me...unfortunately for Eddie... but when I listen to stevie i think about stevie... that's a breath of fresh air I tell ya....

    there's a storm brewin alright... I'm in it... just tryin to figure out where I'm gonna be thrown ... but who gives a fuck... not me... it's not where we get but how we get there yeah... and getting thrown about is just as good as any other way... if not better...
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Godfather. wrote:
    are you kidding ? Stevie Nicks..I'd drag my naked butt thru broaken glass just to hear her say my name...on the phone :lol:
    Godfather.

    ahh shit yes... that's what I wanted to hear... i couldn't have said it any fuckin better... yes I believe I too would drag my naked butt through broken glass just to hear her say my name... and yeah... on the phone....

    i was just tellin my sister that when I listen to Eddie i think about me...unfortunately for Eddie... but when I listen to stevie i think about stevie... that's a breath of fresh air I tell ya....

    there's a storm brewin alright... I'm in it... just tryin to figure out where I'm gonna be thrown ... but who gives a fuck... not me... it's not where we get but how we get there yeah... and getting thrown about is just as good as any other way... if not better...

    lifes a wild ride ! hold on tight and enjoy the ride !!!

    Godfather.
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