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Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited March 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I hold them all inside
like the iron cross inside my heart
they're with me at every step I take
they are the dreams I can't leave behind.

Who am I but a scream in the night
to carry this iron cross
through the thunder lightning and rain
I will find my way.

Godfather.
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  • WaveRyderWaveRyder Posts: 1,128
    ok.




    ?
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    sever head cold, nyquel and and Tylenol pm.....and the mad ramblings of self sedated sick guy... :lol:
    my bad.


    Godfather.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    I suggest getting a head cold more often.

    I thought this was most excellent writing.

    Your "bad"?....
    Maybe you mean--how do they say it--your badassness?
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Half Full wrote:
    I suggest getting a head cold more often.

    I thought this was most excellent writing.

    Your "bad"?....
    Maybe you mean--how do they say it--your badassness?

    WOW ! thanks Half Full you just made my morning. ;)

    Godfather.
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    This is an amazing poem. I keep reading it over and it gets me differently every time.
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    pepper wrote:
    This is an amazing poem. I keep reading it over and it gets me differently every time.


    your response is amazing Pepper,thank you so much !!!

    Godfather.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Godfather. wrote:
    I hold them all inside
    like the iron cross inside my heart
    they're with me at every step I take
    they are the dreams I can't leave behind.

    Who am I but a scream in the night
    to carry this iron cross
    through the thunder lightning and rain
    I will find my way.

    Godfather.


    Dark, moving and potent. I like this a lot!
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Even with a bad cold - you wrote a wonderful poem... Thank you GF... :D

    Hope you feel better soon.
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    WaveRyder wrote:
    ok.




    ?

    The point of this?
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • WaveRyderWaveRyder Posts: 1,128
    the wolf wrote:
    WaveRyder wrote:
    ok.




    ?

    The point of this?

    was wondering where it came from. didnt know if op came up with it or if it came from a movie or something
    RC, SoDak 1998 - KC 2000 - Council Bluffs IA 2003 - Fargo ND 2003 - St. Paul MN 2003 - Alpine Valley 2003 - St Louis MO 2004 - Kissimmee FLA 2004 - Winnipeg 2005 - Thunder Bay 2005 - Chicago 2006 - Grand Rapids MI 2006 - Denver CO 2006 - Lollapalooza 2007 - Bonnaroo 2008 - Austin City Limits 2009 - Los Angeles 2009 - KC 2010 - St Louis MO 2010 - PJ20 Night 1 - PJ20 Night 2
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    WaveRyder wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    WaveRyder wrote:
    ok.




    ?

    The point of this?

    was wondering where it came from. didnt know if op came up with it or if it came from a movie or something


    My bad bro,..
    I guess I'm in a shitty mood and took it the wrong way.

    Apologies.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • WaveRyderWaveRyder Posts: 1,128
    the wolf wrote:

    My bad bro,..
    I guess I'm in a shitty mood and took it the wrong way.

    Apologies.
    no sweat
    RC, SoDak 1998 - KC 2000 - Council Bluffs IA 2003 - Fargo ND 2003 - St. Paul MN 2003 - Alpine Valley 2003 - St Louis MO 2004 - Kissimmee FLA 2004 - Winnipeg 2005 - Thunder Bay 2005 - Chicago 2006 - Grand Rapids MI 2006 - Denver CO 2006 - Lollapalooza 2007 - Bonnaroo 2008 - Austin City Limits 2009 - Los Angeles 2009 - KC 2010 - St Louis MO 2010 - PJ20 Night 1 - PJ20 Night 2
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