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~angel traces~

prismprism Posts: 2,440
edited July 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art


an angel whispered
i may be done here
but i'm not finished
look, right over there

she has the strength
respect and sense
to not take for granted
this most precious gift

not letting her forget
by bringing laughter to her lips
even when her heart is crying
a reminder though she knows

that everyday on this earth
is one given of real miracles
like one of a perfect match
to be graciously appreciated

those without care or understanding
can't share in her earthly gifts
of a truly interconnected soul
one that's sure to cry or laugh
responding to an angel ~
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
angels share laughter
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    prism wrote:


    an angel whispered
    i may be done here
    but i'm not finished
    look, right over there

    she has the strength
    respect and sense
    to not take for granted
    this most precious gift

    not letting her forget
    by bringing laughter to her lips
    even when her heart is crying
    a reminder though she knows

    that everyday on this earth
    is one given of real miracles
    like one of a perfect match
    to be graciously appreciated

    those without care or understanding
    can't share in her earthly gifts
    of a truly interconnected soul
    one that's sure to cry or laugh
    responding to an angel ~


    lovely...inspiring... heartfelt
    as beautiful as an angel is....you write...
    heavensent ...prettiest words I have read in a very very long time :D
    thank you
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    prism wrote:


    an angel whispered
    i may be done here
    but i'm not finished
    look, right over there

    she has the strength
    respect and sense
    to not take for granted
    this most precious gift

    not letting her forget
    by bringing laughter to her lips
    even when her heart is crying
    a reminder though she knows

    that everyday on this earth
    is one given of real miracles
    like one of a perfect match
    to be graciously appreciated

    those without care or understanding
    can't share in her earthly gifts
    of a truly interconnected soul
    one that's sure to cry or laugh
    responding to an angel ~



    so beautiful
    absolutely gorgeous
    thanks for sharing :)
    peace,
    jo

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  • Bathgate66Bathgate66 Posts: 15,813
    prism wrote:


    an angel whispered
    i may be done here
    but i'm not finished
    look, right over there

    she has the strength
    respect and sense
    to not take for granted
    this most precious gift

    not letting her forget
    by bringing laughter to her lips
    even when her heart is crying
    a reminder though she knows

    that everyday on this earth
    is one given of real miracles
    like one of a perfect match
    to be graciously appreciated

    those without care or understanding
    can't share in her earthly gifts
    of a truly interconnected soul
    one that's sure to cry or laugh
    responding to an angel ~





    Very very nice, Prism !
    I can definitely relate- especially to this part :

    that everyday on this earth
    is one given of real miracles
    like one of a perfect match
    to be graciously appreciated


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  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    thank you...

    that's very kind of y'all to say

    :)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    It's beautiful prism... very emotional for me... thank you for sharing....

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    thank you, HSB

    i wrote this nearly a year ago...inspired by a true angel... :D
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    prism wrote:
    thank you, HSB

    i wrote this nearly a year ago...inspired by a true angel... :D
    Did I say how much I needed this? :D
  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I'm so sorry I accidentally used the same name for my new poem! :oops:
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  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    :)

    Thanks for the reassurance DinghyDog!

    But, I just edited mine to change it.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    this was a favorite "angel" of mine ...

    and I will always believe in miracles :D
  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    DinghyDog wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    this was a favorite "angel" of mine ...

    and I will always believe in miracles :D

    do you know who it was about?
    yep I do
  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
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    Post edited by DinghyDog on
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    it was 5 years ago today i was given his gift and i am fortunate everyday since...

    much love and gratitude beyond measure to my angel, R...

    RIP awesome man
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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