"OFF"
the wolf
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the thorny flower
lay crumpled on the floor
drops of blood leaving a trail
to the backdoor
one in the chamber
safety in the "off" position
he took aim
and delivered
a volley of spoken death
she never knew what hit her
she called his name
but he was too far gone
he would hear her lies
no more
lay crumpled on the floor
drops of blood leaving a trail
to the backdoor
one in the chamber
safety in the "off" position
he took aim
and delivered
a volley of spoken death
she never knew what hit her
she called his name
but he was too far gone
he would hear her lies
no more
Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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1998: Barrie
2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
2006: Toronto X2
2009: Toronto
2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
2023: Chicago X2
2024: New York X2
You know wolf, I feared your last post 'Goodbye' might be something symbolic. Glad you've come back and hit us with this one!
Send my credentials to the house of detention
I've been writing every day,.. It all just sucks.
Every area has been shit. I get a great idea for a song, and it just leaves me by the time I write the first verse.
Poetry has been an absolute nightmare.
Short Stories, I won't even try right now.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
Writers block sucks though! What I find worse is when you have the images and ideas dancing around your head but they just won't leave....and land......somewhere!
Keep writing.....your talent is real!
Don't quite know what I'm trying to say - other than - good luck and I feel for you!
ps - if the poem above is what comes out of a writer's block......
Send my credentials to the house of detention
I think even the 'shit' is worth something cause at least it means youre writing... Your mind is thinking... And that can only be a good thing.
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
I fuckin' second that
1998: Barrie
2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
2006: Toronto X2
2009: Toronto
2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
2023: Chicago X2
2024: New York X2
There's definitely a lot to said just for 'writing' - writing anything, like you say. I have found over the past year or so that just doing more writing - about anything, has really helped me move forward, and get my shit back together..... Gotta keep writing!
Send my credentials to the house of detention
I always enjoy your poetry... even when you have writers block.
Wish you were here...
♥~RIP Dad
Godfather.
"what a long, strange trip it's been"
agree with everyone else, writing comes in waves, to and fro.
but the block, the wall, the obstacle in your journey to creative freedom will eventually disappear