YOU

zarocat
zarocat Posts: 1,901
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
YOU

You must use your gift and not leave it behind as you walk through this life
A conundrum my love

Led by those shining eyes, Wizardly beautiful you walk
Within a puzzled photograph of black edges with a centered sky
1996: Toronto
1998: Barrie
2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
2006: Toronto X2
2009: Toronto
2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
2022: Ottawa, Hamilton, Toronto
2023: Chicago X2
2024: New York X2
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  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    zarocat wrote:
    YOU

    You must use your gift and not leave it behind as you walk through this life
    A conundrum my love

    Led by those shining eyes, Wizardly beautiful you walk
    Within a puzzled photograph of black edges with a centered sky

    I have read your few entrées on her and they're very cool,I like em
    are they leading to something other than the woman or life/love you seem to be
    writing about ? reminds me of the beginning of a longer poem or story.

    Godfather.
  • zarocat
    zarocat Posts: 1,901
    That is original. I just write from observing others and from my own personal experiences & influences. How they apply, etc. Life always influences my writing. I don't find myself daydreaming. It's rare and can be fun. 'YOU' addresses balancing love within fear that occurs within the superego and ultimately choosing love over fear ... I think :crazy:
    I guess it could also address comfort in the sense that whatever happens, it will be ok. :idea:
    Just keep going child of mine ... :arrow:
    1996: Toronto
    1998: Barrie
    2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
    2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
    2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
    2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
    2006: Toronto X2
    2009: Toronto
    2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
    2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
    2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
    2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
    2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
    2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
    2022: Ottawa, Hamilton, Toronto
    2023: Chicago X2
    2024: New York X2

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