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Perpetual Bliss

pepperpepper Posts: 155
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sitting on a cloud
Licking my wings
You know, the ones we’re told aren’t there
And I’m watching you
Running
On breathless ground
Stopping only to wash your face in tears
So I whisper to the wind
That I love you.
Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    simply beautiful...
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    angels share laughter
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    the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Do I like this because I can relate to feeling this way?

    Or

    Because I wish someone felt that for me right now?

    Or both?

    I'm not sure. Either way, its very good and thought provoking.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    the wolf wrote:
    Do I like this because I can relate to feeling this way?

    Or

    Because I wish someone felt that for me right now?

    Or both?

    I'm not sure. Either way, its very good and thought provoking.

    it's been provoking my thoughts since reading it....i also agree that it's both...

    i can relate to feeling this way (especially towards my children)

    & um...yeah...

    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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    zarocatzarocat Posts: 1,901
    "So I whisper to the wind
    That I love you"

    provoked him ---> Zarocat
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    pepperpepper Posts: 155
    Thank you!

    I'd like to think that if you have ever felt this way about someone then it is highly likely that someone has felt this way about you!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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