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acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this fight will never end

do you hear me?
listen closely
…don't lose me
drugs work
this fight will never get easy
… who are you fighting?
me?

don’t.

you’ll hit the ground hard
and you will hurt
the drugs will not work
you will remember happiness
that will not return
you will hurt in love

this is a fight
and it will never end

do you hear me!

can you see
the enemy?

your mouth’s getting dry
soon…
it’ll be time to get high
and you’ll be looking for me
you will not be looking to fight
there will be a moment of happiness
the moment will then die
you will remember
a feather
you will smile

…and you will cry

you will know love
And you will know that it’s a fight
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Awesome as usual my friend.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    "don't it make you smile
    ... don't it make me smile

    ... i miss you already
    i miss you all day"

    fuck
  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    the wolf wrote:
    Awesome as usual my friend.


    +1 :)
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    "sometimes I reach to myself

    dear God"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    thank you wolf... and electricxlovex.. for taking the time




    No …

    This I cannot do
    I could not …
    How long until…
    But I will
    And I will
    Else…

    But I can’t
    not until I’m killed
    I’ll find peace…in this life I know it lies somewhere
    They say it does…so many faces… everyday …I see them everyday
    And they never look like me
    … maybe when I sleep
    I'm not like me

    Not yet I’m not grey
    I am strong else I’d be dead

    (I'm sane
    and I've got my shit together
    outside the birds,
    they did flutter)
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    You are a brilliant writer. The tempo and rhythm of your words - the space. It is always always affecting. And the words themselves. Great
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    ".... to be an adult"


    tremors.... i feel a little less shitty... thanks
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrossOceans wrote:
    thank you wolf... and electricxlovex.. for taking the time




    No …

    This I cannot do
    I could not …
    How long until…
    But I will
    And I will
    Else…

    But I can’t
    not until I’m killed
    I’ll find peace…in this life I know it lies somewhere
    They say it does…so many faces… everyday …I see them everyday
    And they never look like me
    … maybe when I sleep
    I'm not like me

    Not yet I’m not grey
    I am strong else I’d be dead

    (I'm sane
    and I've got my shit together
    outside the birds,
    they did flutter)


    fucking hell


    fucking awesome
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    acrossOceans wrote:
    ".... to be an adult"


    tremors.... i feel a little less shitty... thanks

    Hope things improve for you brother. Keep writing, keep hoping
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    oh to feel
    less shitty

    i hear you
    i feel you, s
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    shitty's all i know... and what i know i do best...if it were any other way i probably wouldn't be able to hack it anyway... so fuck it.. it is what it is isn't it... and what it is is actually quite funny ... ha ha
  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    tremors wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    ".... to be an adult"


    tremors.... i feel a little less shitty... thanks

    Hope things improve for you brother. Keep writing, keep hoping


    +1

    hope things get better
    they will eventually
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    tremors wrote:
    You are a brilliant writer. The tempo and rhythm of your words - the space. It is always always affecting. And the words themselves. Great

    this is so right on the money.
    :clap: +1

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrosSShit wrote:
    shitty's all i know... and what i know i do best...if it were any other way i probably wouldn't be able to hack it anyway... so fuck it.. it is what it is isn't it... and what it is is actually quite funny ... ha ha


    well
    it appears that you have a lot of shit you need to get across
    so have at us
    go about the business
    of getting your shit across
    to us
    we are out here
    oceans of shit away
    yet right fucking here
    gayleweed
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    chickweed wrote:
    acrosSShit wrote:
    shitty's all i know... and what i know i do best...if it were any other way i probably wouldn't be able to hack it anyway... so fuck it.. it is what it is isn't it... and what it is is actually quite funny ... ha ha


    well
    it appears that you have a lot of shit you need to get across
    so have at us
    go about the business
    of getting your shit across
    to us
    we are out here
    oceans of shit away
    yet right fucking here
    gayleweed


    rocker gayleweed... such beautiful words.. and just for me and my shit ??

    forgetaboutit... I'm honoured... truly

    i like my new name... fuckin stands for something...
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrosSShit wrote:
    chickweed wrote:
    acrosSShit wrote:
    shitty's all i know... and what i know i do best...if it were any other way i probably wouldn't be able to hack it anyway... so fuck it.. it is what it is isn't it... and what it is is actually quite funny ... ha ha


    well
    it appears that you have a lot of shit you need to get across
    so have at us
    go about the business
    of getting your shit across
    to us
    we are out here
    oceans of shit away
    yet right fucking here
    gayleweed


    rocker gayleweed... such beautiful words.. and just for me and my shit ??

    forgetaboutit... I'm honoured... truly

    i like my new name... fuckin stands for something...

    that's what i thought about dickweed
    :lol:
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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