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chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
edited January 2011 in All Encompassing Trip
Been sketching out ideas for a new shirt in my shop, in honor of the 20th anniversary! Done two versions, one in a rougher state and a cleaner version. I'm leaning towards the rougher one, and played around with placement, but thought I'd share to get some feedback :)

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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Been sketching out ideas for a new shirt in my shop, in honor of the 20th anniversary! Done two versions, one in a rougher state and a cleaner version. I'm leaning towards the rougher one, and played around with placement, but thought I'd share to get some feedback :)

    design.jpg
    examples-1.jpg

    at first i was going to say definitely the rough sketch

    but then, i dunno...i like the other one too

    but i like the center large logo or the pocket area for the logo the best

    not a lotta help huh? :D

    you know, i never put your screen-name with your etsy page..and your fb (until i asked mickey where he got the stuff for his secret santa).

    well, no sense in being stupid 'lest you show it right?
    peace,
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  • zenithzenith Posts: 3,191
    absolutely rough

    great 8-)
    impatience is a gift ........
  • tomoniatomonia Posts: 4
    ROUGH!!!!
  • Music For RhinosMusic For Rhinos Posts: 1,693
    I like the rough one too, but they are all cool.

    As far as placement, I don't care for the bottom two where it is placed lower...but all the other ones look great.

    Nice work!
  • DissidentmanDissidentman Posts: 15,378
    I like it rough, and down below.
  • nuffingmannuffingman Posts: 3,014
    Definitely the rough version and centred.
  • nuffingmannuffingman Posts: 3,014
    Dissidentman wrote:
    I like it rough, and down below.
    :shock: and you can keep your fantasies to yourself. :lol:
  • DissidentmanDissidentman Posts: 15,378
    nuffingman wrote:
    Dissidentman wrote:
    I like it rough, and down below.
    :shock: and you can keep your fantasies to yourself. :lol:


    :lol::lol: It's not like I have a pic of what your dirty mind is thinking as my avatar.
  • leddeadleddead Posts: 158
    Cleaner version, Pocket
  • Black DiamondBlack Diamond Posts: 25,107
    leddead wrote:
    Cleaner version, Pocket
    Me too

    Awesome as always :mrgreen:
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  • Bump30Bump30 Posts: 446
    Rough in the middle of the shirt would be my pick!
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  • dr0ptheleashdr0ptheleash Posts: 1,264
    I like rough, at hip/side
  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    Thanks guys! Do you feel the letter P reads as a P, or should I mess with it some so it's more legible?
  • Black DiamondBlack Diamond Posts: 25,107
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Thanks guys! Do you feel the letter P reads as a P, or should I mess with it some so it's more legible?
    The rough one looks fine, but you could open the eye on the P a bit on the Cleaner one...

    Possible to work the number 20 into the PJ somehow? What do I know, I work in finance :lol:
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  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    Black Diamond wrote:
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Thanks guys! Do you feel the letter P reads as a P, or should I mess with it some so it's more legible?
    The rough one looks fine, but you could open the eye on the P a bit on the Cleaner one...

    Possible to work the number 20 into the PJ somehow? What do I know, I work in finance :lol:
    Yeah i was thinking of that, and then thought perhaps having the dates on either side would look good. I'll sketch out some ideas during my break at work today :)
  • RYEzupSFRYEzupSF Posts: 6,003
    ooohhhhh i like!!!

    I like all, but prefer the rough either centered or hip/side. Hip/side would look good on a hoodie too. Also like BD's suggestion of incorporating 20. Nice work!
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  • Abe FromanAbe Froman Posts: 5,253
    Definitely rough and down to side. Clean/pocket/center is not my style though. Too boring.
  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    Thanks everyone for the feedback! :)
  • normnorm Posts: 31,146
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Black Diamond wrote:
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Thanks guys! Do you feel the letter P reads as a P, or should I mess with it some so it's more legible?
    The rough one looks fine, but you could open the eye on the P a bit on the Cleaner one...

    Possible to work the number 20 into the PJ somehow? What do I know, I work in finance :lol:
    Yeah i was thinking of that, and then thought perhaps having the dates on either side would look good. I'll sketch out some ideas during my break at work today :)

    the P can be slightly more defined but it's a hella great design :thumbup: :clap:







    and i like it clean and rough (cue the barry white) :wave:
  • RKCNDYRKCNDY Posts: 31,013
    rough....and i agree with norm...the 'P' should be a little more defined...at first I thought it was a lower-case cursive 'L'

    beautiful chiqui! :clap:
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  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    very cool design
    i like the rougher one the most probably but they both look good
  • PureandEasyPureandEasy Posts: 5,799
    I don't where care you put the design B, I'm DEFINITELY buying one of these.

    THEY ARE SWEEEEEEEEET.
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    I like it rough as a sandpaper condom... :shock:

    Nice work, Chiqui.
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  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    dr0ptheleash wrote:
    I like rough, at hip/side

    That's my favorite too. :mrgreen:

    Great design!
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Rough for sure. and I think I like it centered.

    Looks great on white too !

    Nice Job !
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  • Music For RhinosMusic For Rhinos Posts: 1,693
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Black Diamond wrote:
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    Thanks guys! Do you feel the letter P reads as a P, or should I mess with it some so it's more legible?
    The rough one looks fine, but you could open the eye on the P a bit on the Cleaner one...

    Possible to work the number 20 into the PJ somehow? What do I know, I work in finance :lol:
    Yeah i was thinking of that, and then thought perhaps having the dates on either side would look good. I'll sketch out some ideas during my break at work today :)

    I agree with you Chiqui, the dates on either side look good and would be much better than working in the number 20. Plus, PJ already did that with the PJ20 shirt and hoodie so it would make yours more original having the dates.
  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    Music For Rhinos wrote:
    I agree with you Chiqui, the dates on either side look good and would be much better than working in the number 20. Plus, PJ already did that with the PJ20 shirt and hoodie so it would make yours more original having the dates.
    Yeah that's a good point, that's another reason why I used the actual years in there. I think I might stick with that. I was able to play with adjusting the P, I'll share what I've done when I get home, work's been bedlam today!
  • LizardLizard Posts: 12,091
    eyedclaar wrote:
    I like it rough as a sandpaper condom... :shock:

    Nice work, Chiqui.

    OOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWCCCCCCCCHHHH!!!!


    Nice work,chiqui!
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  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    Lizard wrote:
    eyedclaar wrote:
    I like it rough as a sandpaper condom... :shock:

    Nice work, Chiqui.

    OOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWCCCCCCCCHHHH!!!!


    Nice work,chiqui!
    OW indeed! :shock: haha

    And thanks! :D
  • Paulina87Paulina87 Posts: 3,300
    dcfaithful wrote:
    dr0ptheleash wrote:
    I like rough, at hip/side

    That's my favorite too. :mrgreen:

    Great design!

    +1 but the pocket area is cool too
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