Good Night Star

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
parents haunt
their children's course
while sleeping stars
get born from eagle's horse

drip drip steam
an endless angel's dream
ripped to shreds
above a lonesome bed

tip-toed slip
don't you go from me
stay right here
you're angel-starred for me

your sunset course
comes bounding back to me
try not to slip
while I'm waiting while I'm waiting

like throwing peanut shells
down the "Oh Well!"
you are the coolest thing
that I've never seen

like holy beluga or
chicken hallelujah
my name is forever and I am
forever I am forever I am
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  • Half Full wrote:
    drip drip steam
    an endless angel's dream

    you're angel-starred for me

    your sunset course
    comes bounding back to me
    try not to slip
    while I'm waiting while I'm waiting


    you are the coolest thing
    that I've never seen

    like holy beluga or
    chicken hallelujah
    my name is forever and I am
    forever I am forever I am

    very interesting, and good. unique poem ^ some of my favourite parts :)
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Half Full wrote:
    drip drip steam
    an endless angel's dream

    you're angel-starred for me

    your sunset course
    comes bounding back to me
    try not to slip
    while I'm waiting while I'm waiting


    you are the coolest thing
    that I've never seen

    like holy beluga or
    chicken hallelujah
    my name is forever and I am
    forever I am forever I am

    very interesting, and good. unique poem ^ some of my favourite parts :)

    Thank you, electricxlovex, and thank you for showing favorites !
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    WOW ! that is a great poem Half Full,awesome.

    Godfather.
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