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heaven and hell

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Your face is gaunt
your blue eyes are pale
Your “third leg” is now a cane
Your mind has become so clouded
That you often sound insane

I’ve watched you waste away
Up and down the scale
I’ve never felt love more deeply though
Simultaneous heaven and hell

I have been grateful for knowing
that is up until now
To have an idea when you’d be leaving
And to know exactly how

We buried our Boo together
what scorching pain we shared
I thought I’d be more ready for this
That I would be better prepared

Well, I’m neither
ready nor prepared
Go ahead god – just fuck me blind
E, don’t leave here yet
PLEASE don’t leave me behind


i love you
my best friend
my husband
my heart
my love
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    dickweed wrote:
    Your face is gaunt
    your blue eyes are pale
    Your “third leg” is now your cane
    Your mind has become so clouded
    That you often sound insane

    ...

    I have been grateful for knowing
    that is up until now
    To have an idea when you’d be leaving
    And to know exactly how
    ...

    Well, I’m neither
    ready nor prepared
    Go ahead god – just fuck me blind
    E, don’t leave here yet
    PLEASE don’t leave me behind


    you've broken me... dickweed
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrossOceans wrote:
    dickweed wrote:
    Your face is gaunt
    your blue eyes are pale
    Your “third leg” is now your cane
    Your mind has become so clouded
    That you often sound insane

    ...

    I have been grateful for knowing
    that is up until now
    To have an idea when you’d be leaving
    And to know exactly how
    ...

    Well, I’m neither
    ready nor prepared
    Go ahead god – just fuck me blind
    E, don’t leave here yet
    PLEASE don’t leave me behind


    you've broken me... dickweed

    thanks shizzles
    broke my damn self too
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • BinauralJamBinauralJam Posts: 14,158
    damn, so sorry.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    dickweed wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    you've broken me... dickweed

    thanks shizzles
    broke my damn self too

    wish i could put you back together giggles... not sure if i can : (
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    dickweed wrote:
    Your face is gaunt
    your blue eyes are pale
    Your “third leg” is now your cane
    Your mind has become so clouded
    That you often sound insane

    I’ve watched you waste away
    Up and down the scale
    I’ve never felt love more deeply though
    Simultaneous heaven and hell

    I have been grateful for knowing
    that is up until now
    To have an idea when you’d be leaving
    And to know exactly how

    We buried our Boo together
    such scorching pain we shared
    I thought I’d be more ready for this
    That I would be better prepared

    Well, I’m neither
    ready nor prepared
    Go ahead god – just fuck me blind
    E, don’t leave here yet
    PLEASE don’t leave me behind


    i love you
    my love
    my heart
    my husband
    my best friend

    I wish I could do something to make the pain go away G, I'm thinking about you and I'm praying for both of you.

    J.
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Its not often that I shed a tear here, I guess I'm usually all cried out by the time I come here.

    But this,.. I shed more than a tear, .. I full on broke down.

    I pray that you both find peace and comfort,.. You've already found love.

    Thinking of you both my friend. Please be well.


    - steve
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    So sorry for your pain...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Just reading this kills me,
    I can imagine what you are going through
    You've captured in writing what you are feeling, and so eloquently
    You're a great writer, and I'm sorry it has to be so sad for you now
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Half Full wrote:
    Just reading this kills me,
    I can imagine what you are going through
    You've captured in writing what you are feeling, and so eloquently
    You're a great writer, and I'm sorry it has to be so sad for you now


    i guess we all walk that long road
    ey sister
    peace
    and thank you
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    G, I don't know what to say - other than love and peace be with you.

    I have to read this part of the forum in small doses, and sometimes cannot 'browse' it unless I am feeling solid. If I had read this before I would probably be a mess on the carpet too. But right now I'm just..... something.

    Lots of love, kind poetic sis
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    dickweed wrote:
    Your face is gaunt
    your blue eyes are pale
    Your “third leg” is now a cane
    Your mind has become so clouded
    That you often sound insane

    I’ve watched you waste away
    Up and down the scale
    I’ve never felt love more deeply though
    Simultaneous heaven and hell

    I have been grateful for knowing
    that is up until now
    To have an idea when you’d be leaving
    And to know exactly how

    We buried our Boo together
    what scorching pain we shared
    I thought I’d be more ready for this
    That I would be better prepared

    Well, I’m neither
    ready nor prepared
    Go ahead god – just fuck me blind
    E, don’t leave here yet
    PLEASE don’t leave me behind


    i love you
    my best friend
    my husband
    my heart
    my love

    oh... no.... :cry:

    heaven and hell here
    heaven there
    your love is beautiful....
    it heals here and lives there

    I won't say everything will be alright
    I'll just say I'm so very sorry.
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