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without me (Eddie to me)

acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you might have led
had you not followed me

you might have heard more
had you not listened
to me

you might have found love
without me

you might have been more
you might have been yours
I can’t give you
what you may have lost

…not your fault
that the world knows me
it’s not your fault
that you found me
I don’t see the things
you see in me
I don’t see why
you follow me

…you might have gotten lost
you might have been yours
you might have been something more

…consider
the dreams you see
consider how you see me
while you’re still young
consider sobriety

I’m not looking to lose you
in your dreams
I do not hate you
why make this about me
hate yourself if you wish to
I know when I was like you
I used to hate me too

the things
that I would do

I was young
I’d wished to be found
then I was found
they called me beautiful
and said they loved me
but I never wanted to be found
with my insides out
and after they re-arranged my brain
I found what was real to me
…taken away from me
I could not even scream
for they’d also taken my lungs out

I know it’s my fault
and I know
you hurt with me

…far behind me you still follow me
because for you now
there is no other way you see
you’re too old now
to lose your way
you’re all
that you wanna be
not like me
reflecting me
and I know

that you need me

still I do not know who you are
and when I go
I hope you make it
without me
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    The world would be a lesser place without you my friend.

    This is great though.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    AOAOAO
    how great is this for me to read this monday morning?
    very
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    :clap:
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    ohhhhh man this is awesome excuse me while I pick my ass up off the floor.

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    didn't mean to make you fall Godfather... but thanks for the fall : )

    ty lg... i would've considered this more apt for a tuesday night but hell.. i can only hope your monday's unfoldin well

    here here half half.. here's to full full
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    the wolf wrote:
    The world would be a lesser place without you my friend.

    This is great though.


    this world would be a lesser place without someone who's not me wolf, but your sentiment means... everything. thank you so much
  • BinauralJamBinauralJam Posts: 14,158
    8-)
  • tinkerbelltinkerbell Posts: 2,161
    That is beautiful.... and very sad
    all you need is love, love is all you need
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    very cool BinauralJam ...


    and thank you tinkerbell... but your name's more beautiful : )
  • tinkerbelltinkerbell Posts: 2,161
    ;) :oops:
    all you need is love, love is all you need
  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    really good and moving
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    good stuff mr. dude man
    thank you for inspiring me
    you have just lit a flame for me
    it is your spark
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    wow.

    i'll come back to say more when i've recovered

    and dried my tears
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    to quote him - this is the best life I've ever lived - and it's because of him... yet I seem to have come up with this, maybe nicely worded, but slightly ungrateful sounding stuff... fuck me

    but thank you all very much for your words and feelings... they mean so much

    ... didn't mean to make you cry StillHere but thanks for crying : )
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    This is deep; think I'll have to read it quite a few more times
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  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    tremors... your avatar is deep... no code ...in Silent black and white... i love it
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    acrossOceans wrote:
    tremors... your avatar is deep... no code ...in Silent black and white... i love it


    hehehe. I like to change them around from time to time. I tried a different one recently but I had complaints that it wasn't up to my usual standards! So I went back to the drawing board!

    Have read your poem a few times. That is some deep stuff there.
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    acrossOceans wrote:
    to quote him - this is the best life I've ever lived - and it's because of him... yet I seem to have come up with this, maybe nicely worded, but slightly ungrateful sounding stuff... fuck me

    but thank you all very much for your words and feelings... they mean so much

    ... didn't mean to make you cry StillHere but thanks for crying : )

    it was a good cry :D
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    acrossOceans wrote:

    while you’re still young
    consider sobriety

    But that shit don’t work for me
    And I’m no longer that young
    Do you remember when you were here like me?

    Don’t we sound better high?
    Don’t we feel better... if always drunk?
    ...we don't feel

    the things I see
    you wouldn't wanna believe
    …things I don’t wanna know
    Shit I don’t wanna feel
    What a fucking way.a life to lead…

    … sorry
  • The Porch is full of overweight jobless geeksThe Porch is full of overweight jobless geeks Posts: 64
    "this is the best life I've ever lived" i saw that written on a sign, Berlin 2010 :D
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    We Are All One wrote:
    "this is the best life I've ever lived" i saw that written on a sign, Berlin 2010 :D

    "...so far..."

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lw-xsQY_4Y4

    you'll find it here ....
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • tinkerbelltinkerbell Posts: 2,161
    acrosSShit wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:

    while you’re still young
    consider sobriety

    But that shit don’t work for me
    And I’m no longer that young
    Do you remember when you were here like me?

    Don’t we sound better high?
    Don’t we feel better... if always drunk?
    ...we don't feel

    the things I see
    you wouldn't wanna believe
    …things I don’t wanna know
    Shit I don’t wanna feel
    What a fucking way.a life to lead…

    … sorry

    Unfortunately I know too many people like this...
    all you need is love, love is all you need
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    tinkerbell wrote:
    acrosSShit wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:

    while you’re still young
    consider sobriety

    But that shit don’t work for me
    And I’m no longer that young
    Do you remember when you were here like me?

    Don’t we sound better high?
    Don’t we feel better... if always drunk?
    ...we don't feel

    the things I see
    you wouldn't wanna believe
    …things I don’t wanna know
    Shit I don’t wanna feel
    What a fucking way.a life to lead…

    … sorry

    Unfortunately I know too many people like this...

    it's not as bad as it sounds... not at all.... thank God... when i write, i think the worst part of it comes out... or the best ... who knows
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    acrosSShit wrote:
    tinkerbell wrote:
    acrosSShit wrote:

    Unfortunately I know too many people like this...

    it's not as bad as it sounds... not at all.... thank God... when i write, i think the worst part of it comes out... or the best ... who knows


    Keep writing dude. Encore
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    tremors wrote:
    acrosSShit wrote:
    tinkerbell wrote:

    it's not as bad as it sounds... not at all.... thank God... when i write, i think the worst part of it comes out... or the best ... who knows


    Keep writing dude. Encore

    +1
    love it

    and your new name
    i like it
    when i first saw it i thought hey...someone else has a name like that...
    :lol:
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    don't be frightened

    not of your face

    do this to yourself

    not in my name


    ..you'll know
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