no escape

expectorantexpectorant Posts: 36
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
an icy air mass, raw with sadness
settles to rest over ridges, valleys and canyons
painful fingers of frost immobilize
each evergreen needle, bare twig and leafless branch
a radiating cold evaporates all other sensation
and there is no escape from this sadness
when a friend moves on
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    an icy air mass, raw with sadness
    settles to rest over ridges, valleys and canyons
    painful fingers of frost immobilize
    each evergreen needle, bare twig and leafless branch
    a radiating cold evaporates all other sensation
    and there is no escape from this sadness
    when a friend moves on


    Chilling, indeed
    You said it well
  • very beautiful
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