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Predecessor

dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There was a time you were admired
by the eyes below.

You were an idol, a model of perfection,
at best, a future reflection.

Days passed, as well as the time not spent.
The exchanges short, and the efforts were only meant.

The mirror that reflected you is now shattered,
and those eyes are now above.

You no longer remain an aspiration,
now an inspiration.

To surpass, to exceed,
to step out of your shadow,
in sight of the eyes below me.
7/2/06 - Denver, CO
6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
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  • SidnumSidnum Posts: 674
    Like.
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    Sidnum wrote:
    Like.

    Thanks. :)
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    dcfaithful wrote:

    Days passed, as well as the time not spent.
    The exchanges short, and the efforts were only meant.

    when you think of yesterdays, you think of a thought like this
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    acrossOceans wrote:
    dcfaithful wrote:

    Days passed, as well as the time not spent.
    The exchanges short, and the efforts were only meant.

    when you think of yesterdays, you think of a thought like this

    all the things that could've been said, but weren't.
    the things that could've been shown, but weren't.

    Don't take time for granted. It'll fly by. If you love someone, show them with everything in your soul.
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Sidnum wrote:
    Like.

    i like too. :thumbup:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    catefrances wrote:
    Sidnum wrote:
    Like.

    i like too. :thumbup:

    Thank you, Cate. 8-)
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    thank you mr. dcfaithful
    looking forward to more from you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you mr. dcfaithful
    looking forward to more from you

    I've been away from writing for a while. I need a new spark in the normality of my life. I hope I can find that flame again.
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    dcfaithful wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you mr. dcfaithful
    looking forward to more from you

    I've been away from writing for a while. I need a new spark in the normality of my life. I hope I can find that flame again.
    you still mess with cameras?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    chadwick wrote:
    dcfaithful wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    thank you mr. dcfaithful
    looking forward to more from you

    I've been away from writing for a while. I need a new spark in the normality of my life. I hope I can find that flame again.
    you still mess with cameras?

    been a while for that too...

    There has been little inspiration lately.
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
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