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Can you feel me.

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Never ending journey
reaching for the stars up high
riding on a cycle
looking through the dragons eye
I see the mad dogs cry.

Touch a little madness
I can feel it as time goes by
share a little kindness
with the voices in my mind.

Little man on the milky way
smiling at the man on the moon
trading winks with Venus
hoping she will touch us soon.

Walking through a clover field
talking to O'Ryan and his star
trading time for dreams
drinking life from a Mason jar.

Can you feel me.

Take a snap shot picture
save it in your alligator Hyde
save it for O'Ryan
a gift from Venus as she flys.

Can you feel me.




Godfather.
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    very special godfather

    brings lovely visualizations

    thank you

    i love reading your masterpieces

    Peace,
    jo
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    so cool jo,thank you very much !

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:

    I see the mad dogs cry.




    Godfather.


    i see them too

    you got wings Godfather
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossOceans wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:

    I see the mad dogs cry.




    Godfather.


    i see them too

    you got wings Godfather

    nothing like the wings you have Brother, I can't fly but I am trying to see.

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:

    I see the mad dogs cry.




    Godfather.


    i see them too

    you got wings Godfather

    nothing like the wings you have Brother, I can't fly but I am trying to see.

    Godfather.

    He gave me a heart but no wings Godfather
    He then sent an angel... and she flew away ;)
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wings can only carry her for just a short while
    only a true heart can touch the stars my Brother.

    Godfather.
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    A gift from Venus as she flys .... very nice GF
    ********************************************************************************************* image
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    wings can only carry her for just a short while
    only a true heart can touch the stars my Brother.

    Godfather.

    but i left my heart in France Godfather
    and so i have that neither

    least i still got my head together ...shit that 's gotta count for somethin eh... Godfather
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mikalina wrote:
    A gift from Venus as she flys .... very nice GF

    thanks Mikalina !

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossOceans wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    wings can only carry her for just a short while
    only a true heart can touch the stars my Brother.

    Godfather.

    but i left my heart in France Godfather
    and so i have that neither

    least i still got my head together ...shit that 's gotta count for somethin eh... Godfather

    It counts for everything !

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    AcrossOceans if everything we had we could carry in our hands our hearts would be empty,-old proverb I just made up. ;)
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    Godfather. wrote:
    AcrossOceans if everything we had we could carry in our hands our hearts would be empty,-old proverb I just made up. ;)
    <3<3<3
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Godfather. wrote:
    Touch a little madness
    I can feel it as time goes by
    share a little kindness
    with the voices in my mind.
    Nicely Done Godfather!!! ;):D

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    AcrossOceans if everything we had we could carry in our hands our hearts would be empty,-old proverb I just made up. ;)

    it's not what you say... it's how you say it Godfather... how you make it... up ? forgetaboutit.. some insane wisdom ... insane

    so though it may be lying somewhere
    'least i feel it ain't emtpty...
    used to think I'm missing
    used to... maybe not so much no more Godfather
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I feel I am better for reading your thoughts
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    pandora wrote:
    I feel I am better for reading your thoughts

    Pandi....I am speechless,thank you.

    Godfather.
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    This is great... I love how it flows.
    From the tongue's tip to dancing in mid air to across the universe.

    And, if it's a question... the answer is I'm learning. We all are.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    yes i feel it
    yes i feel you
    i am rife with it
    it's erupting from my heart
    and bleeding all over
    the fucking place
    yes i feel real
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    yes i feel it
    yes i feel you
    i am rife with it
    it's erupting from my heart
    and bleeding all over
    the fucking place
    yes i feel real

    I'm belly up on the floor.....

    Godfather.
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