this world

acrossssSsssshittt

what happened
to this town
now razed to the ground
what happened
to this town
here there used to be playgrounds
and now
I see here only holes
in the ground


I think
of this world...
'think of you ...in this world
what happened
to your town

... your town

everywhere I see
I see Your men fighting
only to be free
I shut my eyes
and I can see Your men still clearly
I see them on a killing spree
I look at me
killing things
inside me

what happened
to this world...
what happened
to me ?

‘pray all gets well and this world gets better
‘pray we survive, 'n we get ourselves together
‘pray all gets well and this world feels better
‘pray we survive 'n we get our shit together

…and you are so young
you're just a child
I see killers in the skies
making killer
girls and boys

killer in me

but you are too young...
you’re just a child
it's breaking me
and no longer
can I see you cry

I pray you get well and this world gets better
for you

... still together
and still proud
with love in their hearts
and their minds
still sound
...but the noise
it’s too fucking loud

they believe You're within
…and without
just not
in their town

what happened
to our town

mikalina

Nicely said..... what happend to our world, our town.... I wonder, hope and pray that soon all will get better.

pray all gets well and this world gets better
pray we survive, 'n we get ourselvs together
pray all gets well and this world feels better
pray we survive, 'n we get our shit together....

love it, thank you Shehzad

acrossssSsssshittt

that this means somethin to you means so much to me mika ... thank you

Godfather.

XLNT piece Brother !
one part reminds me of a line in a song by Faith no More "The Killer in Me is the Killer in You"

Godfather.

acrossssSsssshittt

Godfather. wrote:

XLNT piece Brother !
one part reminds me of a line in a song by Faith no More "The Killer in Me is the Killer in You"

Godfather.

ooh the faith no more line really finishes the thought well...

funny that this made you think of a song because this too is a song Godfather... I'm seldom truly content with the finished songs my friends and I write, but i think i can say without feelin too uneasy that the vocal melody and the chords we have to this song have a lot of feeling... and they;re simpe... song's got a low tone to it

thanks Godfather

canoegirl

I like it but it makes me think of golf courses

acrossssSsssshittt

cool.. that's the closest I'll ever come to playin golf i guess

PilateOfTheStorm

‘pray all gets well and this world gets better
‘pray we survive, 'n we get ourselves together
‘pray all gets well and this world feels better
‘pray we survive 'n we get our shit together

…and you are so young
you're just a child
I see killers in the skies
making killer
girls and boys

killer in me

but you are too young...
you’re just a child
it's breaking me
and no longer
can I see you cry

I pray you get well and this world gets better
for you

... still together
and still proud
with love in their hearts
and their minds
still sound
...but the noise
it’s too fucking loud

they believe You're within
…and without
just not
in their town

this part particularly stuck out.
great poem, i like it

The Porch is full of overweight jobless geeks

nice, Peachy!

acrossssSsssshittt

electricxlovex wrote:

‘pray all gets well and this world gets better
‘pray we survive, 'n we get ourselves together
‘pray all gets well and this world feels better
‘pray we survive 'n we get our shit together

…and you are so young
you're just a child
I see killers in the skies
making killer
girls and boys

killer in me

but you are too young...
you’re just a child
it's breaking me
and no longer
can I see you cry

I pray you get well and this world gets better
for you

... still together
and still proud
with love in their hearts
and their minds
still sound
...but the noise
it’s too fucking loud

they believe You're within
…and without
just not
in their town

this part particularly stuck out.
great poem, i like it

that's very cool electricxlovex... i'm grateful you dig

acrossssSsssshittt

We Are All One wrote:

nice, Peachy!

i'll give you somethin peachy .... popkin : )

mysticweed

acrossOceans wrote:

cool.. that's the closest I'll ever come to playin golf i guess

i live in the middle of golf country
am torn
despise the game/love the money

just found
this world
this world
is heavy shit
awesomely awesome
a tour de force
this world
rocks

acrossssSsssshittt

a tour de force around golf country blowin more holes in the grounds ... that's one way to play golf

despising the game not the country can't beat the money

chadwick

what happened to this town?
i've said this before myself

what's happened to this place?

thank you, Sir.

mysticweed

acrossOceans wrote:

a tour de force around golf country blowin more holes in the grounds ... that's one way to play golf

despising the game not the country can't beat the money

well put
"shizzles"

acrossssSsssshittt

lettinggo wrote:

acrossOceans wrote:

a tour de force around golf country blowin more holes in the grounds ... that's one way to play golf

despising the game not the country can't beat the money

well put
"shizzles"

well played giggles

hole in one

mysticweed

acrossOceans wrote:

lettinggo wrote:

acrossOceans wrote:

a tour de force around golf country blowin more holes in the grounds ... that's one way to play golf

despising the game not the country can't beat the money

well put
"shizzles"

well played giggles

hole in one

thank you
sitting at my desk
laughing out loud
you ARE peachy

rollings

in town

acrossssSsssshittt

keep it down ere please... peachy's tryin to take care of business


popkin's dead

acrossssSsssshittt

Half Full wrote:

for shizzles & giggles?

hey where did that pic go ??

my lousy wise cracks they get the better of me : ( ... that was a work of art

The Porch is full of overweight jobless geeks

love it