kiss of death

Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The silence in your eyes
the blank thoughts
words could not form at first

Shock? Disappointment? Love? Unexpected?

You thoroughly tried to impress the helpless, mindless sheep
Shrivelled by old sparks, names etched in skin
Trying to make something out of nothing...
But not me. There was no use.

I could see through you like glacial waters
like the tears streaming across your forgotten face
trickling down your chest
like a window pane on an April afternoon
I follow the racing beads with my piercing eyes
as it descends down your pale, almost translucent flesh
I persue its path with my tongue
I wonder if you can feel my icy fingertips
as they trace your spine
Can you feel it?

You look ill
frail bones
neglected
marks of abuse
not by any being
but your own body's hatred
It's true- we all want you dead
But not before you suffer a bit more
Don't you enjoy the pain?

The thought of your dimples make me tremble
A glimpse of your thighs make me weak
The sound of your voice makes me vomit
Your empty dreams make me blush
The scratching of my nails
on your hips and triceps
forearms and neck
Is that hard enough?

I whisper that I hate you
You smirk just a little
My glazed eyes dance and laugh

It won't be long now...
the poison floods through you veins
You think you are in control
taking whatever you please
lies, blame, pleasure
Too bad you don't see the big picture because
the joke's on you

Can you feel it yet?
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Comments

  • WOW, but nice. :)
    Paul D.
  • "like a window pane on an April afternoon
    I follow the racing beads with my piercing eyes
    as it descends down your pale, almost translucent flesh
    I persue its path with my tongue

    ...

    but not before you suffer a bit more
    ...
    it won't be long now"



    pictures of lovehate.. very cool c.addle
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This doesn't seem to have any love in it, just lust, anger, and vengefulness really...

    Good job expressing that. :eh:
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i do
    yes
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • But, what if I am the 'you' rather than the 'I'?

    And you are the 'I' and all things are relative...
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    But, what if I am the 'you' rather than the 'I'?

    And you are the 'I' and all things are relative...
    "I am he as you are me and we all together,see how they run like pigs from a gun see how they fly...I'm cry'n"

    nice to see you back Ms.Addle. ;)

    Godfather.
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    You think you are in control
    taking whatever you please
    lies, blame, pleasure
    Too bad you don't see the big picture because
    the joke's on you

    Can you feel it yet?
    I like this!

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    just ran across this
    ran wildly and blindly
    on this trip
    i could feel it jumping
    from the page
    like electricity

    so
    so
    good
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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