Whidbey (part I)

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Bottle cork
a simple port
corkscrew
not today
just mangling stoppers
spewing up bark like material
as if a rotten tree logging operation

But I was steady
I was long
I was efficient
even in the rain

Then
the small man

A frail gentleman
but by no means weak
he was as mighty as a horse 17 hands high
to the teeth a work mule of sorts
4 foot nothing from Sunday
98 pounds soaking wet
lived among drained vodka bottles
and old mariner poppy red rooms
where triangles crossed with 13 days gone
and seasick strippers bringing it home

To be continued…
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    edited November 2010
    likie
    chad
    its always good and sometimes even better...

    this is even better :thumbup:
    Post edited by StillHere on
    peace,
    jo

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  • "lived among drained vodka bottles
    and old mariner poppy red rooms
    where triangles crossed with 13 days gone
    and seasick strippers bringing it home "

    i'm wonderin if this frail gentleman's a mariner himself... no matter the state of a mariner, his very existence is.... romantic
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    "lived among drained vodka bottles
    and old mariner poppy red rooms
    where triangles crossed with 13 days gone
    and seasick strippers bringing it home "

    i'm wonderin if this frail gentleman's a mariner himself... no matter the state of a mariner, his very existence is.... romantic

    good writing...

    it conjures up images of the opium dens down along the waterfront around these parts....waay back a hundred + years ago or so
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