I heard a song today

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I heard a song today
I'm sure it was okay
it made me stop and listen
but it wasn't exactly right for what I was feeling
I heard a song today
and I'm sure it was all right
cuz it made me stop and listen
but it wasn't precisely what was on my mind
I heard a song today and
it made me say (to myself) I really needed something closer
a song to sing that was closer to what was in my head
so I decided that I could, would, go home and work on that
instead of searching for someone else's song to come along
on the radio
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Comments

  • This is my life. Amazing piece.
    Can't believe how much it reflects what goes through my head.

    Thanks for sharing.

    -Jacob
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

    Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Thanks for reading it. :)
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