Beautiful Darkness (part one)

the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
edited November 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
in the blink of an eye,
it all washed out
with the blood red memories
that you too should cherish,..
but never will

in the span of a heartbeat,
I saw a look in your eye
telling me you were gone
your body next to me,…
but your heart was with another

with a tender thought,
I erase our past
and snuff out the flame
and breathe in,..
the beautiful darkness
Peace, Love.


"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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Comments

  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Wow, what a poem -

    I really like your second paragraph....


    " in the span of a heartbeat,
    I saw a look in your eye
    telling me you were gone
    your body next to me...
    but your heart was with another..."

    very powerful... Thank you
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    awesome, as always
    8-)
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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