Hooker.

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm standing alone in these places
waiting for her shadow to be cast over me by the brilliance of the sun
here I stand in silent excitement waiting for her to come.

And now she's here and can't say a word
I've lost my will to speak
everyday is a game we play waiting for the night to come.

she might be a hooker but she's dealing hard
Yes she's my secret dream
cause every night she lays with me and puts me down to sleep.

then in the morning when I open my eyes
I reach for something in the night
Standing alone waiting for her shadow come
It's like a bullet shooting through my heart.

My arms held out and my eyes wide open
looking into the sun
waiting for the night to come.

Godfather.
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Comments

  • I can certainly relate to the sentiment behind the prose...
    This is your drug. This is your drug on brains.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    you write your characters so well
    and you have graciously shared so many of them
    you are both prolific and unpredictable
    (is that redundant, do i need the 'both?)
    mmmm
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Nicely done sir. I love it. Inspiring.
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    jfs5-10-10 wrote:
    Nicely done sir. I love it. Inspiring.

    thank you Brother !

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    you write your characters so well
    and you have graciously shared so many of them
    you are both prolific and unpredictable
    (is that redundant, do i need the 'both?)
    mmmm
    :lol: thanks LG !

    Godfather.
  • Godfather. wrote:

    she might be a hooker but she's dealing hard
    ...
    It's like a bullet shooting through my heart.

    Godfather.

    ooh that's gotta be a bitch... all the more so cuz she's got such style and class
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Fabulous writing.....
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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