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Blue is Night

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Forget the days.
how many passed...
...I don't know

Dark and rain falling
drowning
out

They said you were calling

But all I can hear
was rain.......

......falling


Follow me down
here
river banks all your fears

Amid the blades
stabbing
river cried all your tears

They say I don't know you
They say you're not here
But tonight I can feel you
wearing nightfall and drear

High tides lay across
heart strings
that bend low

The reasons I've fallen
rampant
watch you go
Post edited by Unknown User on

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  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    Half Full wrote:
    Forget the days.
    how many passed...
    ...I don't know

    Dark and rain falling
    drowning
    out

    They said you were calling

    But all I can hear
    was rain.......

    ......falling


    Follow me down
    here
    river banks all your fears

    Amid the blades
    stabbing
    river cried all your tears

    They say I don't know you
    They say you're not here
    But tonight I can feel you
    wearing nightfall and drear

    High tides lay across
    heart strings
    that bend low

    The reasons I've fallen
    rampant
    watch you go


    You are very talented...I enjoyed this...by the way, you came on at 4:44----great time
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:

    They said you were calling

    But all I can hear
    was rain.......

    ......falling

    ...
    river cried all your tears


    dear God... this poem ...
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    damn girl
    fucking damn hell
    this is GOOD
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    edited October 2010
    Half Full wrote:
    They say I don't know you
    They say you're not here
    But tonight I can feel you
    wearing nightfall and drear

    Beautiful!
    Post edited by PearlOfAGirl on

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Thank you all so very much :)
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    half half

    looks like I'm gettin credit for stuff you wrote... i could live with that.. what about you
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    Half Full wrote:
    They say I don't know you
    They say you're not here
    But tonight I can feel you
    wearing nightfall and drear

    Beautiful!
    Sorry for the error :oops: I fixed it...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • OceanInDisguise13OceanInDisguise13 Posts: 924
    Half Full , Sir or Madam, you are very talented. That is a great poem. Thank you for sharing it.
    I wish I was an alien at home behind the sun.....
    I wanna race..with the sundown..I want a last breath..I don't let out...
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