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rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All is not lost
for shaking passion

Dew mornings promenade
they wait
they drip promised deliveries to winds

hoping these wings
so beautiful
carry warmth once buried

Laughter to love
or signs of peace
Settle that in swinging
Sway

I'll see you to set the sun
summer the porch
summer the rain
bent arms, recline, relax
relax...
home is
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Half Full wrote:
    All is not lost
    for shaking passion

    Dew mornings promenade
    they wait
    they drip promised deliveries to winds

    hoping these wings
    so beautiful
    carry warmth once buried

    Laughter to love
    or signs of peace
    Settle that in swinging
    Sway

    I'll see you to set the sun
    summer the porch
    summer the rain
    bent arms, recline, relax
    relax...
    home is

    this is great ! you really captured a moment.

    Godfather.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one. :)
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  • Half Full wrote:
    All is not lost
    for shaking passion

    Dew mornings promenade
    they wait
    they drip promised deliveries to winds

    hoping these wings
    so beautiful
    carry warmth once buried

    Laughter to love
    or signs of peace
    Settle that in swinging
    Sway

    I'll see you to set the sun
    summer the porch
    summer the rain
    bent arms, recline, relax
    relax...
    home is


    bit of hope here.. a bit of sadness : (
    bit of laughter : )

    "I'll see you to set the sun
    summer the porch
    summer the rain"

    and this ... is just so fuckin classy
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