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jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Now this is an interesting change of pace.
Walkin real slow to win the race.
Middle of the road.
Light the fire.
Temptations for hire.

Now you're grinning.
Having fun sinning?
Whoring out your soul
Reckless control.

Seven minutes.
Seven minutes.
Think.
Of an answer.
Flipping through AM radio.
Static and white noise.
<b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    jfs5-10-10 wrote:
    Now this is an interesting change of pace.
    Walkin real slow to win the race.
    Middle of the road.
    Light the fire.
    Temptations for hire.

    Now you're grinning.
    Having fun sinning?
    Whoring out your soul
    Reckless control.

    Seven minutes.
    Seven minutes.
    Think.
    Of an answer.
    Flipping through AM radio.
    Static and white noise.

    your stuff really is a creative focus on life, I like this very much.

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    are you a Doors fan ?

    Godfather.
  • jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
    I am a huge doors fan.
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

    Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    I feel it in your writing.

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    I feel it in your writing.

    Godfather.

    good call j
    now that you mention it
    i can hear it too
    ('cause i love me some lk)

    jfs - you just keep cranking out
    one beautiful piece after the other
    good work
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    I feel it in your writing.

    Godfather.

    good call j
    now that you mention it
    i can hear it too
    ('cause i love me some lk)

    jfs - you just keep cranking out
    one beautiful piece after the other
    good work

    ;) hows it going LG, all is well I hope.

    Godfather.
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