Poem: The great room (part I)

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The great room

The room spilled open
the pillows
they all slowly flew away
all so small
feathers all a going
confused peacocks humming pulling the lead
a sparkling flight
all sailing off on a clumsy murmur

Feeling lost
and undone
the clearing opened like a tale
all the ceilings
vast and close
arced with
broken down coastal shrubs
and mushroom patches designed by rainbows or gifts

She wouldn’t let me arch over
until the beveled glass fell
from grace
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    The great room

    The room spilled open
    the pillows
    they all slowly flew away
    all so small
    feathers all a going
    confused peacocks humming pulling the lead
    a sparkling flight
    all sailing off on a clumsy murmur

    Feeling lost
    and undone
    the clearing opened like a tale
    all the ceilings
    vast and close
    arced with
    broken down coastal shrubs
    and mushroom patches
    designed by rainbows
    or gifts

    She wouldn’t let me arch over
    until the beveled glass fell
    from graces mirror
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • jfs5-10-10
    jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
    Excellent!! I love it! Can't wait for the next one.
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

    Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..

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