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And I love her....mushy poem.

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When she touches me my world spins around
and sends me to a place where only angels fly
and I see her
she's flying through my mind
touching down on a star as we leave this world behind.

Everything she touches brings a beautiful vision of lights color and sound
stars that shoot across the sky
she has made my heart shine.

All these things she gives to me with out need to receive
she's happy just to be with me
she is everything I need
she is every dream as I lay and sleep
she is all the love that I wish to keep.

I love her more with every breath.

Godfather.
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Comments

  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    yes Godfather ! you're feelin the love ... so good to see
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    you always write things that touch nerves and makes me cry...stop it!!!! :lol:
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    you always write things that touch nerves and makes me cry...stop it!!!! :lol:
    sorry Skye :D thank you !!!!

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossOceans wrote:
    yes Godfather ! you're feelin the love ... so good to see

    thanks Bro.

    Godfather.
  • OceanInDisguise13OceanInDisguise13 Posts: 924
    Very nice. I can definetly feel the love...Keep on writing please!! :)
    I wish I was an alien at home behind the sun.....
    I wanna race..with the sundown..I want a last breath..I don't let out...
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    WOW, what a beautiful poem and a wonderful love in your life....

    mushy poems are needed sometimes. Thank you for sharing. :D
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I love mushy poems kisssmile.gif ahhh
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    GF, you KNOW how i feel about mushy
    and i fucking love it
    not much mush that i could muster
    in my own very humble opinion,
    i feel more of an intensity of
    red hot love
    and the purity of white hot love
    not in a struggle
    but in a Yin-Yang kind of way
    afw (tonight that means Awesomely Fine Writing)
    LG
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    GF, you KNOW how i feel about mushy
    and i fucking love it
    not much mush that i could muster
    in my own very humble opinion,
    i feel more of an intensity of
    red hot love
    and the purity of white hot love
    not in a struggle
    but in a Yin-Yang kind of way
    afw (tonight that means Awesomely Fine Writing)
    LG

    ;)

    Godfather.
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    I Love this Godfather!!! :D

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thank you HSB! how are you you doing these days ?hope all is well.

    Godfather.
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Godfather. wrote:
    thank you HSB! how are you you doing these days ?hope all is well.

    Godfather.
    All could be better Godfather, but that's what tomorrows are for...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    thank you HSB! how are you you doing these days ?hope all is well.

    Godfather.
    All could be better Godfather, but that's what tomorrows are for...

    everyday is a new day and I try and take each day just like that,I know sometimes that tomorrows fears are very real but today all is well.

    Godfather.
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