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Vikingfjord (part I) & Death

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited October 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Foremost fjord
opening
all in down beneath
hell sails
screaming when coming
you can hear breathing
feel it
chests up
down

I swear
all gods
goddesses
sky opening me up
all stars
red going
this rage
Valhalla

Motherly
reap tearful axes
everywhere
I just cant imagine more blunt crushing hammers
all iron-wooden
leather straps fit inside wind-curves
all swinging so many falling apart

Breathing in so god damn much
I
it is
all of it
silver frozen sunrises
ripping heads apart
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    WAAAAOOOO !!!!! this is one of my favorites from you Chad,you just put a Frank Frizzetta painting into words..a painting in my mind of Viking lore, XLNT Brother !!.

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i love frank frazetta
    he paints me
    well, he used too
    ;)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    WAAAAOOOO !!!!! this is one of my favorites from you Chad,you just put a Frank Frizzetta painting into words..a painting in my mind of Viking lore, XLNT Brother !!.

    Godfather.

    i do not know of this Frizzetta you speak of
    but this writing is so damn good, cw
    vivid, and picturesque
    just wonderful
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    WAAAAOOOO !!!!! this is one of my favorites from you Chad,you just put a Frank Frizzetta painting into words..a painting in my mind of Viking lore, XLNT Brother !!.

    Godfather.

    i do not know of this Frizzetta you speak of
    but this writing is so damn good, cw
    vivid, and picturesque
    just wonderful

    google his name frank friezzta ( not to sure how it's spelled)

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    lettinggo wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    WAAAAOOOO !!!!! this is one of my favorites from you Chad,you just put a Frank Frizzetta painting into words..a painting in my mind of Viking lore, XLNT Brother !!.

    Godfather.

    i do not know of this Frizzetta you speak of
    but this writing is so damn good, cw
    vivid, and picturesque
    just wonderful
    i'll tell you a secret.
    when i wrote this i was feeling a lot :evil:
    sometimes my blood desires to go back in time.
    grit my teeth, one fist clenched, breathing is huge it is very wide breathing
    the chest expands and contracts with visions of old war
    longships rowing/sailing seas both smooth and rough
    looking for a ruckus

    i am grateful i can control my genes/DNA urges
    sounds accurate to me

    also, i want to write a viking war book sometime
    i need to go to the source and do reseach
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Godfather. wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    WAAAAOOOO !!!!! this is one of my favorites from you Chad,you just put a Frank Frizzetta painting into words..a painting in my mind of Viking lore, XLNT Brother !!.

    Godfather.

    i do not know of this Frizzetta you speak of
    but this writing is so damn good, cw
    vivid, and picturesque
    just wonderful

    google his name frank friezzta ( not to sure how it's spelled)

    Godfather.
    frank frazetta
    not with an i
    with an a
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    http://www.frankfrazetta.net/index.html
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    vikingfjord is also vodka
    i suggest drinking at least 1/2 a 5th before killing everyone in your path :twisted:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    vikingfjord is also vodka
    i suggest drinking at least 1/2 a 5th before killing everyone in your path :twisted:

    only half?
    p---y
    :D
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    lettinggo wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    vikingfjord is also vodka
    i suggest drinking at least 1/2 a 5th before killing everyone in your path :twisted:

    only half?
    p---y
    :D
    at least half or 7 feet
    at least
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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