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Dream

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Dream.

Place your self in summer fields
surrounded by your deepest desires
and touch the morning sun
as it creeps inside your open mind.

let it carry you on golden rays of vibrant dreams
to rest your mind and see inside the moving hands
of time.

Walk with me we'll share a thought
of all the things we've won and lost.

when you feel like letting go
I'll save these days to walk with you
and love will fill our open minds.

Visions in our fields of time
Heaven is our life as it shines
love is yours and love is mine.

and all these years and all our dreams
are safe inside my open mind.

Holding hands as we walk we'll share a dream
and share a thought and remember all the thing's
we've won and lost.

Godfather.
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Sounds nice GF.

    i can dig it.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    beautiful GF - What a wonderful "Dream" thank you for sharing...
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thanks !

    Godfather.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I love this one Godfather. :)
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    damn, you just don't run out of stuff to write
    this is so touching and beautiful

    ps: i always feel like letting-go :lol:
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    Godfather. wrote:
    Dream.

    Place your self in summer fields
    surrounded by your deepest desires
    and touch the morning sun
    as it creeps inside your open mind.

    let it carry you on golden rays of vibrant dreams
    to rest your mind and see inside the moving hands
    of time.

    Walk with me we'll share a thought
    of all the things we've won and lost.

    when you feel like letting go
    I'll save these days to walk with you
    and love will fill our open minds.

    Visions in our fields of time
    Heaven is our life as it shines
    love is yours and love is mine.

    and all these years and all our dreams
    are safe inside my open mind.

    Holding hands as we walk we'll share a dream
    and share a thought and remember all the thing's
    we've won and lost.

    Godfather.

    I want to be there...great work!!
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    very nice Godfather
    you are awesome
    have you read this poem to your wife?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    chadwick wrote:
    very nice Godfather
    you are awesome
    have you read this poem to your wife?

    Thanks Chad.....I'm reading and trying to learn Bro.

    she See's very little of this stuff, this place is my place to think dream and just have a little alone time, it's kinda like throwing thoughts and ideas into the sky and not worry where/how they land....do you kinda know what I mean ?

    runaway thank you very much !!!

    Godfather.
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    Godfather. wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    very nice Godfather
    you are awesome
    have you read this poem to your wife?

    Thanks Chad.....I'm reading and trying to learn Bro.

    she See's very little of this stuff, this place is my place to think dream and just have a little alone time, it's kinda like throwing thoughts and ideas into the sky and not worry where/how they land....do you kinda know what I mean ?

    runaway thank you very much !!!

    Godfather.

    I stream here to,...someone rocked my world in the worst way..he keeps coming around...enjoy marriage, the vows are so meaningful...to be someone whose never been married and probably never will, share your work with her...you write from the heart
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    runaway wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    very nice Godfather
    you are awesome
    have you read this poem to your wife?

    Thanks Chad.....I'm reading and trying to learn Bro.

    she See's very little of this stuff, this place is my place to think dream and just have a little alone time, it's kinda like throwing thoughts and ideas into the sky and not worry where/how they land....do you kinda know what I mean ?

    runaway thank you very much !!!

    Godfather.

    I stream here to,...someone rocked my world in the worst way..he keeps coming around...enjoy marriage, the vows are so meaningful...to be someone whose never been married and probably never will, share your work with her...you write from the heart

    Thanks ;)

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Godfather. wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    very nice Godfather
    you are awesome
    have you read this poem to your wife?

    Thanks Chad.....I'm reading and trying to learn Bro.

    she See's very little of this stuff, this place is my place to think dream and just have a little alone time, it's kinda like throwing thoughts and ideas into the sky and not worry where/how they land....do you kinda know what I mean ?

    runaway thank you very much !!!

    Godfather.
    i more than kinda know what you mean.
    we all need and deserve alone time.
    i would be the worst person on earth if i did not have alone time.
    actually i need it to live.

    you have good writing and heart godfather.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    Dream.

    Place your self in summer fields
    surrounded by your deepest desires
    and touch the morning sun
    as it creeps inside your open mind.

    let it carry you on golden rays of vibrant dreams
    to rest your mind and see inside the moving hands
    of time.

    Walk with me we'll share a thought
    of all the things we've won and lost.

    when you feel like letting go
    I'll save these days to walk with you
    and love will fill our open minds.

    Visions in our fields of time
    Heaven is our life as it shines
    love is yours and love is mine.

    and all these years and all our dreams
    are safe inside my open mind.

    Holding hands as we walk we'll share a dream
    and share a thought and remember all the thing's
    we've won and lost.

    Godfather.

    I could hide inside your head Godfather... though that's likely to kill the romance..sorry
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossOceans wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    Dream.

    Place your self in summer fields
    surrounded by your deepest desires
    and touch the morning sun
    as it creeps inside your open mind.

    let it carry you on golden rays of vibrant dreams
    to rest your mind and see inside the moving hands
    of time.

    Walk with me we'll share a thought
    of all the things we've won and lost.

    when you feel like letting go
    I'll save these days to walk with you
    and love will fill our open minds.

    Visions in our fields of time
    Heaven is our life as it shines
    Love is yours and love is mine.

    and all these years and all our dreams
    are safe inside my open mind.

    Holding hands as we walk we'll share a dream
    and share a thought and remember all the thing's
    We've won and lost.

    Godfather.

    I could hide inside your head Godfather... though that's likely to kill the romance..sorry
    :lol: brother you might see the monster in the closet or wild images of Meg Ryan...shhhh don't tell my wife. :lol:

    Godfather.
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    This IS very beautiful.
    Visions in our fields of time, I love that line.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I like to walk along and dream with you, lovely
    I trust you Godfather :D
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    pandora wrote:
    I like to walk along and dream with you, lovely
    I trust you Godfather :D
    what a wonerful thing to say Pandi thank you so much !
    and thank you Dang Dang,sooo cool !

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:

    I could hide inside your head Godfather... though that's likely to kill the romance..sorry
    :lol: brother you might see the monster in the closet or wild images of Meg Ryan...shhhh don't tell my wife. :lol:

    Godfather.

    a bit o meg ryan never harmed no one...
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