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A moment in time

DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Forever grateful
Grateful aligned

unexplainable
unexplainable
unexplainable time

Drenched of colors
sound surround

stomp patchouli acid
...jingle and rhyme

streaming dreadlocks
streaming
living pores

Grooving moving flying
motion like birds

What you and I heard is
What you and I heard

Miracles on shakedown street
Dance...
what you & I heard
what you & I heard
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    I like it Dang Dang !
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one too. :thumbup:
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Thanks
    Thanks
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    DangDang wrote:
    Forever grateful
    Grateful aligned

    Grooving moving flying
    motion like birds

    What you and I heard is
    What you and I heard

    Miracles on shakedown street
    Dance...
    what you & I heard
    what you & I heard

    wtf
    "what you and i heard is
    what you and i heard"
    so simple and so true
    "miracles on shakedown street"
    what a concept
    what a piece
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    she's good :thumbup:
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    DangDang wrote:
    Forever grateful
    Grateful aligned

    unexplainable
    unexplainable
    unexplainable time

    Drenched of colors
    sound surround

    stomp patchouli acid
    ...jingle and rhyme

    streaming dreadlocks
    streaming
    living pores

    Grooving moving flying
    motion like birds

    What you and I heard is
    What you and I heard

    Miracles on shakedown street
    Dance...
    what you & I heard
    what you & I heard

    badass
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Gee, thanks Tremors,
    thanks Chadwick
    and thanks Lettinggo
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    "stomp patchouli acid
    ...jingle and rhyme"


    sounds yummy... and the tune sounds sweet
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    acrossOceans wrote:
    "stomp patchouli acid
    ...jingle and rhyme"


    sounds yummy... and the tune sounds sweet

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tA8ykjJpOE8

    YUMBO
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    DangDang wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    "stomp patchouli acid
    ...jingle and rhyme"


    sounds yummy... and the tune sounds sweet

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tA8ykjJpOE8

    YUMBO


    dangdang's motto: If in doubt, bring on 'the Dead'

    :lol:

    What is it about this place on a weekend? there sometimes seems sod all going on in the forum, and then you find all these amazing poets creeping around out here and posting profound stuff at the drop of a hat! It's enough to get me back into this section - I have to pace myself cos I get a bit too 'unguarded' for everyday life!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    yOU CAN do it tremors.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    tremors wrote:
    DangDang wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    "stomp patchouli acid
    ...jingle and rhyme"


    sounds yummy... and the tune sounds sweet

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tA8ykjJpOE8

    YUMBO


    dangdang's motto: If in doubt, bring on 'the Dead'

    :lol:

    What is it about this place on a weekend? there sometimes seems sod all going on in the forum, and then you find all these amazing poets creeping around out here and posting profound stuff at the drop of a hat! It's enough to get me back into this section - I have to pace myself cos I get a bit too 'unguarded' for everyday life!

    let us unleash ourselves on this motherfucker we call life...
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    DangDang wrote:
    yOU CAN do it tremors.


    sometimes......

    LOL @Oceans!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    acrossOceans wrote:
    let us unleash ourselves on this motherfucker we call life...

    Bring us on!

    (What did I just say?)
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow !!! that is awesome..sooo freakin awesome, xlnt write Dang Dang !

    Godfather.
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Thank you Godfather
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