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tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
uncarved as a block
don't seem so romantic
ticking away an evening
trying to find.......
not the numbness
(but scared of the intensity)
find that song
that feeling
skirting round it
an elephant in the room
long gone and murdered long ago
circling, seeking
what?
a way out of this trap
forward, backward, regret, relief
peace fleeting peace
yes I have to admit it
relief is getting dull
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Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    edited September 2010
    DangDang wrote:
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    yes that's a good way of saying it.
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    relief is getting dull
    love it!
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    lettinggo wrote:
    relief is getting dull
    love it!


    thanks - that line made me chuckle when I wrote it - so I thought - 'the end'
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