Ebb n Flow
inlet13
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This is a song/poem I've written... felt like sharing today...
The translucence of a rain drop, the opaque feeling when it hits your eye
How a life can look up for hope and really believe hope floats in the sky
But is the source actually deep down, in the midst of our hearts, all the way inside?
Is that where our hope lives? Does it flow to our brains, fuel the burn of life?
because when it flows (it knows where to go)
with no eyes
when it flows (it floods right through)
ebb and does not rise
until we flow (it knows where to go)
With no eyes
until we flow…
it just goes...
So many reasons to look up, politicians, bureaucrats, governments and lies
So many reasons to lose hope, but somehow we find this comfort in the sky
Despite the water that flows through us and the full moon that glows at night
We still lay down to sleep, unlike the tides, we do not rise
until we flow (we know where to go)
with no eyes
until we flow (it floods right through)
ebb and do not rise
until we flow (we know where to go)
ebb and does not rise
until we flow..
we just go…
Ebb and flow…
there's and ebb n flow to our life
Ebb and flow...
there's an ebb n flow to our life
we ebb and flow...
... we just do.
Here's the song...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JOKjAa2ygE
The translucence of a rain drop, the opaque feeling when it hits your eye
How a life can look up for hope and really believe hope floats in the sky
But is the source actually deep down, in the midst of our hearts, all the way inside?
Is that where our hope lives? Does it flow to our brains, fuel the burn of life?
because when it flows (it knows where to go)
with no eyes
when it flows (it floods right through)
ebb and does not rise
until we flow (it knows where to go)
With no eyes
until we flow…
it just goes...
So many reasons to look up, politicians, bureaucrats, governments and lies
So many reasons to lose hope, but somehow we find this comfort in the sky
Despite the water that flows through us and the full moon that glows at night
We still lay down to sleep, unlike the tides, we do not rise
until we flow (we know where to go)
with no eyes
until we flow (it floods right through)
ebb and do not rise
until we flow (we know where to go)
ebb and does not rise
until we flow..
we just go…
Ebb and flow…
there's and ebb n flow to our life
Ebb and flow...
there's an ebb n flow to our life
we ebb and flow...
... we just do.
Here's the song...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JOKjAa2ygE
Here's a new demo called "in the fire":
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very good songwriting... i love the pararaph above and the ending lyrics... the whole song ... where we find hope, and how we risk losing it...
you're badass
i wish i played guitar
holy shit
you're awesome
playing guitar or whatever (a piano) i think would help with writing, yes/no?
well done, Sir.
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
"what a long, strange trip it's been"