next morning

acrossssSsssshittt

relief in abusing me

next morning feels sweet?
next morning feels empty

why… nothing other than me?

never fail to see… the big tree
I never fail to see
the colours outside me
I never fail to smell
the cinnamon coffee
never fail to remember my lil niece
while lookin at the waffles and strawberries

I never fail to remember
a dream

why the fights only…
when I sleep?
what does that say
of me?

how to proceed?
why everything but me?
why did they call it getting high?
when on heroin
even the black died

for some
it was always gonna be
about how best to get high
for is the colour found only
on the outside?
until there is found that
which reflects a part inside

this is more than a life

Godfather.

so much thought in that poem I can almost see you thinking, XLNT !!!!!!!

Godfather.

StillHere

@Across Oceans

that is a deep deep piece of work
I can't say I know exactly where you're coming from
But i can certainly feel a lot from your words
I really like it, in an uneasy sort of way, but that's what makes it so good, the feeling it conveys
I always look forward to your stuff
thanks for sharing

acrossssSsssshittt

thanks Still Here, appreciate it..

Godfather, cool thought but you wouldn't wanna see me think... face gets all distorted and I look all ugly... but thank you so much

Godfather.

acrossOceans wrote:

thanks Still Here, appreciate it..

Godfather, cool thought but you wouldn't wanna see me think... face gets all distorted and I look all ugly... but thank you so much

ha ha ha my face is like that every morning when I wake up.....and when I go to sleep.

Godfather.

acrossssSsssshittt

Godfather. wrote:

acrossOceans wrote:

thanks Still Here, appreciate it..

Godfather, cool thought but you wouldn't wanna see me think... face gets all distorted and I look all ugly... but thank you so much

ha ha ha my face is like that every morning when I wake up.....and when I go to sleep.

Godfather.

mornin and night...ah forget about it... I'm uglier than usual

jfs5-10-10

I like this a lot. Great read. Thank you.

mysticweed

has your usual intensity been amped up?
this is almost too good
i mean so intently heart piercing
(no i'm not going to cry )
such deep and dark lessons in these words

acrossssSsssshittt

lettinggo wrote:

has your usual intensity been amped up?

Ha Ha! na, there's no intensity ere, just a shitty amp, so all I really got is crazy feedback ... but thank you lettinggo... your words are sincere : )


..and thank you jfs, you're too kind