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But to you

DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I cry in the space that is filled with you
Guitar strings beautiful run through it too

What I can
What I have
What you want
I will

But to you I could be anyone
anyone

nothing
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    this is awesome
    i was there with you girl, right up until the
    nothing
    i couldn't wrap my mind around the
    nothing
    i got lost at the
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    lettinggo wrote:
    this is awesome
    i was there with you girl, right up until the
    nothing
    i couldn't wrap my mind around the
    nothing
    i got lost at the

    You got lost at the nothing? Good thing it was at the end then!
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    DangDang wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    this is awesome
    i was there with you girl, right up until the
    nothing
    i couldn't wrap my mind around the
    nothing
    i got lost at the

    You got lost at the nothing? Good thing it was at the end then!

    yep, a fucking riot :lol:
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    lettinggo wrote:
    DangDang wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    this is awesome
    i was there with you girl, right up until the
    nothing
    i couldn't wrap my mind around the
    nothing
    i got lost at the

    You got lost at the nothing? Good thing it was at the end then!

    yep, a fucking riot :lol:

    Yes, but isn't this poem about the oldest heartbreak in the book? Unrequited love?
    one love + one love = BIG LOVE BETWEEN TWO
    one love + no love = NOTHING
    Just another way to say that same old thing
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    DangDang wrote:

    Yes, but isn't this poem about the oldest heartbreak in the book? Unrequited love?
    one love + one love = BIG LOVE BETWEEN TWO
    one love + no love = NOTHING
    Just another way to say that same old thing


    very true.

    very good poem. am glad I came to read the poetry again - although I'm not really in the mode to write anything here myself currently :|
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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