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blow me (another one for the boss)

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
BLOW ME

You cannot stoop to help a child
you cannot stop to lend a hand
Your advances come at the
expense of others, to that end
BLOW ME

You use and abuse
with a permanent smile
I have seen through your
fucking facade all this while
BLOW ME

You chain your dog
that fucking hurts me so
I would like to chain your ass
just so you would know
BLOW ME

Your hair is turning
prematurely gray
maybe the universe is catching up to you
in her all knowing way

yeah?
blow me anyfuckingway
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    :clap: :thumbup:
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • Electric_DeltaElectric_Delta Posts: 977
    You don't work for the postal service, do you?
    Bristow, VA (5/13/10)
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Electric_Delta wrote:
    You don't work for the postal service, do you?

    :lol:

    no
    i work for a small family owned corporation and while they do have some good qualities, sharing the wealth is NOT one of them.
    peace
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • klusterfukklusterfuk Posts: 1,411
    lettinggo wrote:
    Electric_Delta wrote:
    You don't work for the postal service, do you?

    :lol:

    no
    i work for a small family owned corporation and while they do have some good qualities, sharing the wealth is NOT one of them.
    peace

    sounds like the same place i worked for eight years. plus i had the pleasure of working like a fucking dog.
    The future's paved with better days

    Alpine Valley Resort is etched in my brain!!!


  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    BLOW ME

    You cannot stoop to help a child
    you cannot stop to lend a hand
    Your advances come at the
    expense of others, to that end
    BLOW ME

    You use and abuse
    with a permanent smile
    I have seen through your
    fucking facade all this while
    BLOW ME

    You chain your dog
    that fucking hurts me so
    I would like to chain your ass
    just so you would know
    BLOW ME

    Your hair is turning
    prematurely gray
    maybe the universe is catching up to you
    in her all knowing way

    yeah?
    blow me anyfuckingway


    HA HA HA....blow me ?...LOL!!! I love it :lol: you can't say that :lol:
    I think you just wrote the new version of "take this job and shove it" blow me has a message that you just can't misunderstand when used in anger,it took me a few min. to stop laughing so I could reply :lol:
    but on a serious note I hope your day gets better.

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    BLOW ME

    You cannot stoop to help a child
    you cannot stop to lend a hand
    Your advances come at the
    expense of others, to that end
    BLOW ME

    You use and abuse
    with a permanent smile
    I have seen through your
    fucking facade all this while
    BLOW ME

    You chain your dog
    that fucking hurts me so
    I would like to chain your ass
    just so you would know
    BLOW ME

    Your hair is turning
    prematurely gray
    maybe the universe is catching up to you
    in her all knowing way

    yeah?
    blow me anyfuckingway


    HA HA HA....blow me ?...LOL!!! I love it :lol: you can't say that :lol:
    I think you just wrote the new version of "take this job and shove it" blow me has a message that you just can't misunderstand when used in anger,it took me a few min. to stop laughing so I could reply :lol:
    but on a serious note I hope your day gets better.

    Godfather.

    oh, gf, i so can say blow me 8-)
    it is not in my current nature to throw off so much negativity
    but you guys recieve so well and then throw such positive feedback
    you all have healed my fucked up friday
    thanks
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    You must feel better and I despise anyone who chains their dog, too.
    Perhaps a new job is in order. To work for someone you can respect,
    who makes you feel appreciated and needed.
    Good small family run corps and bizs are out there,
    maybe start looking, I know the job market isn't great now but may improve, drop a resume'.
    Then save your poem and give it to him as you blow his job off!!
    Good luck and


    ITS FRIDAY!!!!
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    pandora wrote:
    You must feel better and I despise anyone who chains their dog, too.
    Perhaps a new job is in order. To work for someone you can respect,
    who makes you feel appreciated and needed.
    Good small family run corps and bizs are out there,
    maybe start looking, I know the job market isn't great now but may improve, drop a resume'.
    Then save your poem and give it to him as you blow his job off!!
    Good luck and


    ITS FRIDAY!!!!

    As is so often the case,
    Pandi is the icing on the cake.
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Wow.

    That blew me away.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    sweetly done.
    outstanding.
    some people suck.

    you rock.
    :)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    did you ask your boss if he knows the difference between a blow job and a bologna sandwich :lol:

    I read this one from time to time just for a smile, thanks LG.

    Godfather.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    tremors wrote:
    You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!

    i have previously been, with misguided gusto i may add
    a proper fuck up
    and
    a proper heathen
    (previously because i have just recently, finally outgrown being a proper fuck up
    and heathen can only be forced on to believers)

    so,
    with apologies to proper poets everywhere
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    lettinggo wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!

    i have previously been, with misguided gusto i may add
    a proper fuck up
    and
    a proper heathen
    (previously because i have just recently, finally outgrown being a proper fuck up
    and heathen can only be forced on to believers)

    so,
    with apologies to proper poets everywhere


    Yeah being a proper fuck up gets kind of boring after a while; it's a luxury of peacetime!!

    I like your poems a lot though - It's good to have strong structures to contain fiery and distressing emotions. You always seem have both in your writing (structure & fire)
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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