blow me (another one for the boss)

mysticweed

BLOW ME

You cannot stoop to help a child
you cannot stop to lend a hand
Your advances come at the
expense of others, to that end
BLOW ME

You use and abuse
with a permanent smile
I have seen through your
fucking facade all this while
BLOW ME

You chain your dog
that fucking hurts me so
I would like to chain your ass
just so you would know
BLOW ME

Your hair is turning
prematurely gray
maybe the universe is catching up to you
in her all knowing way

yeah?
blow me anyfuckingway

the wolf

:clap: :thumbup:

Electric_Delta

You don't work for the postal service, do you?

mysticweed

Electric_Delta wrote:

You don't work for the postal service, do you?

no
i work for a small family owned corporation and while they do have some good qualities, sharing the wealth is NOT one of them.
peace

klusterfuk

lettinggo wrote:

Electric_Delta wrote:

You don't work for the postal service, do you?

no
i work for a small family owned corporation and while they do have some good qualities, sharing the wealth is NOT one of them.
peace

sounds like the same place i worked for eight years. plus i had the pleasure of working like a fucking dog.

Godfather.

lettinggo wrote:

BLOW ME

You cannot stoop to help a child
you cannot stop to lend a hand
Your advances come at the
expense of others, to that end
BLOW ME

You use and abuse
with a permanent smile
I have seen through your
fucking facade all this while
BLOW ME

You chain your dog
that fucking hurts me so
I would like to chain your ass
just so you would know
BLOW ME

Your hair is turning
prematurely gray
maybe the universe is catching up to you
in her all knowing way

yeah?
blow me anyfuckingway

HA HA HA....blow me ?...LOL!!! I love it you can't say that
I think you just wrote the new version of "take this job and shove it" blow me has a message that you just can't misunderstand when used in anger,it took me a few min. to stop laughing so I could reply
but on a serious note I hope your day gets better.

Godfather.

mysticweed

Godfather. wrote:

lettinggo wrote:

BLOW ME

You cannot stoop to help a child
you cannot stop to lend a hand
Your advances come at the
expense of others, to that end
BLOW ME

You use and abuse
with a permanent smile
I have seen through your
fucking facade all this while
BLOW ME

You chain your dog
that fucking hurts me so
I would like to chain your ass
just so you would know
BLOW ME

Your hair is turning
prematurely gray
maybe the universe is catching up to you
in her all knowing way

yeah?
blow me anyfuckingway

HA HA HA....blow me ?...LOL!!! I love it you can't say that
I think you just wrote the new version of "take this job and shove it" blow me has a message that you just can't misunderstand when used in anger,it took me a few min. to stop laughing so I could reply
but on a serious note I hope your day gets better.

Godfather.

oh, gf, i so can say blow me 8-)
it is not in my current nature to throw off so much negativity
but you guys recieve so well and then throw such positive feedback
you all have healed my fucked up friday
thanks

pandora

You must feel better and I despise anyone who chains their dog, too.
Perhaps a new job is in order. To work for someone you can respect,
who makes you feel appreciated and needed.
Good small family run corps and bizs are out there,
maybe start looking, I know the job market isn't great now but may improve, drop a resume'.
Then save your poem and give it to him as you blow his job off!!
Good luck and


ITS FRIDAY!!!!

mysticweed

pandora wrote:

You must feel better and I despise anyone who chains their dog, too.
Perhaps a new job is in order. To work for someone you can respect,
who makes you feel appreciated and needed.
Good small family run corps and bizs are out there,
maybe start looking, I know the job market isn't great now but may improve, drop a resume'.
Then save your poem and give it to him as you blow his job off!!
Good luck and


ITS FRIDAY!!!!

As is so often the case,
Pandi is the icing on the cake.

DangDang

Wow.

That blew me away.

chadwick

sweetly done.
outstanding.
some people suck.

you rock.

Godfather.

did you ask your boss if he knows the difference between a blow job and a bologna sandwich

I read this one from time to time just for a smile, thanks LG.

Godfather.

tremors

You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!

mysticweed

tremors wrote:

You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!

i have previously been, with misguided gusto i may add
a proper fuck up
and
a proper heathen
(previously because i have just recently, finally outgrown being a proper fuck up
and heathen can only be forced on to believers)

so,
with apologies to proper poets everywhere

tremors

lettinggo wrote:

tremors wrote:

You have a great gift of being able to construct a poem very tightly, yet still sustain high emotions and meaning. This is what 'proper' poets seem to be able to do. I think you are a proper poet!

i have previously been, with misguided gusto i may add
a proper fuck up
and
a proper heathen
(previously because i have just recently, finally outgrown being a proper fuck up
and heathen can only be forced on to believers)

so,
with apologies to proper poets everywhere

Yeah being a proper fuck up gets kind of boring after a while; it's a luxury of peacetime!!

I like your poems a lot though - It's good to have strong structures to contain fiery and distressing emotions. You always seem have both in your writing (structure & fire)