Waiting for you.

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited August 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
If the day comes that you should fall
I will be there to catch you
and bring you to a place that's hidden from your fears
only known to you
only known to me
and no one else at all.

when the darkness comes
and there is nobody to show you the way
I will take your hand
and walk with you to a place
only known to you
only known to me
I will show you the way.

when the winter storm is blowing
and the cold is waiting at your door
I will be the fire burning in your heart
and the warmth to open your door.

only known to you
only known to me.

close your eyes and think of what could be
if you would only open your heart
and feel what I see
everything is waiting in this land of the rising sun
waiting there for you
waiting there for me.

I've been crying lonely tears standing in the rain
waiting for you
waiting for me
only you can take the rain away
and I need you.

only you
only me
and I need you.

Godfather.
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Comments

  • :o wonderful...again I am crying...curse you! :lol:
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    :o wonderful...again I am crying...curse you! :lol:

    ;) thanks Sky.
    Godfather.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Godfather, this is like the essence of being a good dad isn't it? :)
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    justam wrote:
    Godfather, this is like the essence of being a good dad isn't it? :)

    wow ! yes, I had my wife and son in mind when I wrote it.

    Godfather.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Godfather. wrote:
    justam wrote:
    Godfather, this is like the essence of being a good dad isn't it? :)

    wow ! yes, I had my wife and son in mind when I wrote it.

    Godfather.
    :)
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    This poem is beautiful... Thank you for sharing.
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  • LoujoeLoujoe Posts: 9,485
    very beautiful...the hardest thing is letting go...if we do things right, a piece of our heart will be forever in our loved ones...that's eternal life...to me anyway...
  • you're a rocker Godfather... you say it with such class
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thanks ya'll, very cool.

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    edited August 2010
    Loujoe wrote:
    very beautiful...the hardest thing is letting go...if we do things right, a piece of our heart will be forever in our loved ones...that's eternal life...to me anyway...
    GF, you have inspired someone's first post
    i don't believe i can say anything more appreciative of your writing than that
    Post edited by mysticweed on
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    Loujoe wrote:
    very beautiful...the hardest thing is letting go...if we do things right, a piece of our heart will be forever in our loved ones...that's eternal life...to me anyway...
    GF, you have inspired someone's first post
    i don't believe i can say anything more appreciative of your writing that that

    thanks LG and right back at ya ! and thank you Loujoe.

    Godfather.
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