poem: no title yet (chad)

chadwick

let me catch my breath
let me go and be
do not knock back here no more again

out in stars evermore
do not cry none

allow everything
it is all at once
eternity

pleasure as vivid
as more

less than sun
slight in your grasp
dry my eyes waterfalls spiral galaxy way cluster

sea of stars
dock your buoys

tell me
god dammit!

DangDang

Chadwick,

As a poet, you've got the universe reclining in your hair, now don't you?

(T. Rex said it first, but not to you, I don't think)

mikalina

A lovely poem.... thank you for sharing.

I really like your third paragraph.


allow everything
it is all at once
eternity

chadwick

DangDang wrote:

Chadwick,

As a poet, you've got the universe reclining in your hair, now don't you?

(T. Rex said it first, but not to you, I don't think)

i suppose i do, yes.
no wonder it's a mess.

thank you.

chadwick

mikalina wrote:

A lovely poem.... thank you for sharing.

I really like your third paragraph.


allow everything
it is all at once
eternity

thank you Mikalina

pandora

and me, I like this

"let me catch my breath
let me go and be
do not knock back here no more again"