desolate

the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
edited August 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
if ever there were a being
that could pull it off
my money would be on you

the not knowing is the hardest part
maybe should have reacted faster?
that would be on me,..
I’ll own that, it’s mine

though I could have, if not
for the unforeseen dick move,…
I’ve been told that I look sexy
with a knife in my back
it’s very slimming

and where are “they” in this dark hour,..
dancing on clouds or climbing ivory towers?


I’ll just go back into my hole now
and not so patiently wait
for word of a miracle
Peace, Love.


"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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Comments

  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    "i've been told i look sexy with a knife in my back
    it's very slimming"

    heady, heavy stuff
    good stuff, tw
    good stuff
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Wow, I almost missed this one. Your second paragraph -very powerful. The not knowing - missed chances.

    Thank you for sharing.
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  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    the wolf wrote:
    if ever there were a being
    that could pull it off
    my money would be on you

    the not knowing is the hardest part
    maybe should have reacted faster?
    that would be on me,..
    I’ll own that, it’s mine

    though I could have, if not
    for the unforeseen dick move,…
    I’ve been told that I look sexy
    with a knife in my back
    it’s very slimming

    and where are “they” in this dark hour,..
    dancing on clouds or climbing ivory towers?


    I’ll just go back into my hole now
    and not so patiently wait
    for word of a miracle
    The not knowing, is indeed the hardest part.... nicely done my friend...

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
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