timing is everything

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited August 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
he was so fucking handsome
fucking funny AND strong
he was so fucking crazy
now he's so fucking gone

show me how not to care
teach me to always share
teach me the relevance
of when and where

show me how not to cry
teach me how not to lie
that who is so much more
vital than why

teach me of un-time
show me one place
where i can learn how to live
without seeing his face


i love you E
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    he was so fucking handsome
    fucking funny AND strong
    he was so fucking crazy
    now he's so fucking gone

    show me how not to care
    teach me to always share
    teach me the relevance
    of when and where

    show me how not to cry
    teach me how not to lie
    that who is so much more
    vital than why

    teach me of un-time
    show me one place
    where i can learn how to live
    without seeing his face


    i love you E

    being a careing person is inside of who you are, I think it's a gift as painful as it may be sometimes is part of what makes us who we are and what is special about us....BTW great read!
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    he was so fucking handsome
    fucking funny AND strong
    he was so fucking crazy
    now he's so fucking gone

    show me how not to care
    teach me to always share
    teach me the relevance
    of when and where

    show me how not to cry
    teach me how not to lie
    that who is so much more
    vital than why

    teach me of un-time
    show me one place
    where i can learn how to live
    without seeing his face


    i love you E

    being a careing person is inside of who you are, I think it's a gift as painful as it may be sometimes is part of what makes us who we are and what is special about us....BTW great read!

    yes, being a caring person is inside
    are we born to care
    or are we taught to care
    or can one even be taught to care?
    more ponderance on evolution of the soul . . .
    i'm spinning oh i'm spinning
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Holy Cow, that was powerful. Blew me away when I read it.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    DangDang wrote:
    Holy Cow, that was powerful. Blew me away when I read it.

    hey dd
    what's up
    witch
    you?
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Oh ya know, sweeping up some soul searching, that's all
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