Pondering The Heavens

BhagavadGita
BhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
To gaze at the stars tonight,
him alone,
does not feel so right.

Who denies themselves a bit of
God's T.V. show?

Afraid.
What is it he might see?
Your so still and brilliant his star
Won't it speak to me?

Will the distance remind me
How unreachable he may be
If he were to lose myself in this
Universal Gladness
...with a hint of madness and of questions with dim answers.




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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    :thumbup:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    BhagavadGita wrote:
    To gaze at the stars tonight,
    him alone,
    does not feel so right.

    Who denies themselves a bit of
    God's T.V. show?

    Afraid.
    What is it he might see?
    Your so still and brilliant his star
    Won't it speak to me?

    Will the distance remind me
    How unreachable he may be
    If he were to lose myself in this
    Universal Gladness
    ...with a hint of madness and of questions with dim answers.

    the night sky, perfectly you capture how I feel standing under it,
    beautiful


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    the night sky, perfectly you capture how I feel when I am standing there so small under it,
    understanding so very little of it.
    Just beautifully written, a joy :clap:

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