ssshhh... the door!

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
hello???
knocking door doesn’t
and i won’t move

hide, dr!
don’t let them in
where’s the needle?

the door?

dr.
i need the needle!

ssshhh!!!!

stop… don’t cry
they’ll leave soon
be gone

(pause)

so here it is
your sharp dream
right here

you can all come out now
the knocking door vanished

smoke your cigars
hold your weeds
and machetes

but dr.
doesn’t this ancient stone
run?

the sun’s fire
is your vein
pricking skin
to disappear

(knocking door)

ssshhh
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    wow!
    don't know exactly what it is about this one
    but i like it a lot
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    submission
    putting in
    ignorance
    nothing comes back
    the same
    way i
    remember it
    writing
    counting
    too many words
    will it ever
    make any sense
    to do it
    again
    but i will
    submission
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    chadwick wrote:
    hello???
    knocking door doesn’t
    and i won’t move

    hide, dr!
    don’t let them in
    where’s the needle?

    the door?

    dr.
    i need the needle!

    ssshhh!!!!

    stop… don’t cry
    they’ll leave soon
    be gone

    (pause)

    so here it is
    your sharp dream
    right here

    you can all come out now
    the knocking door vanished

    smoke your cigars
    hold your weeds
    and machetes

    but dr.
    doesn’t this ancient stone
    run?

    the sun’s fire
    is your vein
    pricking skin
    to disappear

    (knocking door)

    ssshhh
    :o ...I knew you were home...you bastard!!!! :lol::lol:
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    chadwick wrote:
    hello???
    knocking door doesn’t
    and i won’t move

    hide, dr!
    don’t let them in
    where’s the needle?

    the door?

    dr.
    i need the needle!

    ssshhh!!!!

    stop… don’t cry
    they’ll leave soon
    be gone

    (pause)

    so here it is
    your sharp dream
    right here

    you can all come out now
    the knocking door vanished

    smoke your cigars
    hold your weeds
    and machetes

    but dr.
    doesn’t this ancient stone
    run?

    the sun’s fire
    is your vein
    pricking skin
    to disappear

    (knocking door)

    ssshhh
    :o ...I knew you were home...you bastard!!!! :lol::lol:
    haha
    next time, call first.
    i can't be mr. sneaky if you don't call first.
    i just don't answer the door because it is knocking.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • BinauralJamBinauralJam Posts: 14,158
    Cops showed up huh? thay probably had the wrong address to boot.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    KOYOURASS wrote:
    Cops showed up huh? thay probably had the wrong address to boot.
    im sure it was the wrong address.
    all angels here.
    no need for law way.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    chadwick wrote:
    KOYOURASS wrote:
    Cops showed up huh? thay probably had the wrong address to boot.
    im sure it was the wrong address.
    all angels here.
    no need for law way.

    Oh, now I get it.
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