tomorrow when it all begins
i wont be there to see it end
i dont know where it all went wrong
but i suspect it started at hi
defeated ive given all i had
the bloodletting satiated your vampire thirst
tomorrow when it all begins
stand beside me
but i wont be there
This stuff is getting deeper and deeper, darker and darker. I feel like saying 'good luck' though it may or may not be needed.
This line - hit me like a punch
'defeated ive given all i had'
as did the last two
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
im right
youre wrong
ive left you
sucking on the godhead
youll not learn
nor will i
ive left you
yet you still sneak up from behind
im wrong
youre right
im too illiterate
to read the signs
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
reflected in the darkness
mulitplied by sin
everything you thought you were
was just a place to begin
you cant erase the history
but you can build upon its death
and when you stand and face it down
only then will you begin
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
reflected in the darkness
mulitplied by sin
everything you thought you were
was just a place to begin
you cant erase the history
but you can build upon its death
and when you stand and face it down
only then will you be free
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
reflected in the darkness
mulitplied by sin
everything you thought you were
was just a place to begin
you cant erase the history
but you can build upon its death
and when you stand and face it down
only then will you be free
Actually I quoted it because it was may favourite line so far!! Kind of said everything I was feeling - so I didn't comment.... Sorry to disrupt your flow. Free is equally good. I loved it fine first time round tho!
ps - I'm in awe of how you write often - hardly any changes, no punctuation - and yet almost every one of your verses hits home. Quite often is feels like 'consciousness' over poetry. Profound and powerful. Too good for comment usually
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
sweep it all away
stand on broken bones
things said yesterday
form the casket of your future
sweep it all away
reach down and hold the rib
remember this
where is it you came from
but dont lose sight of
where is it im going
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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This stuff is getting deeper and deeper, darker and darker. I feel like saying 'good luck' though it may or may not be needed.
This line - hit me like a punch
'defeated ive given all i had'
as did the last two
Send my credentials to the house of detention
youre wrong
ive left you
sucking on the godhead
youll not learn
nor will i
ive left you
yet you still sneak up from behind
im wrong
youre right
im too illiterate
to read the signs
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
mulitplied by sin
everything you thought you were
was just a place to begin
you cant erase the history
but you can build upon its death
and when you stand and face it down
only then will you begin
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
Send my credentials to the house of detention
reflected in the darkness
mulitplied by sin
everything you thought you were
was just a place to begin
you cant erase the history
but you can build upon its death
and when you stand and face it down
only then will you be free
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
Actually I quoted it because it was may favourite line so far!! Kind of said everything I was feeling - so I didn't comment.... Sorry to disrupt your flow. Free is equally good. I loved it fine first time round tho!
ps - I'm in awe of how you write often - hardly any changes, no punctuation - and yet almost every one of your verses hits home. Quite often is feels like 'consciousness' over poetry. Profound and powerful. Too good for comment usually
Send my credentials to the house of detention
stand on broken bones
things said yesterday
form the casket of your future
sweep it all away
reach down and hold the rib
remember this
where is it you came from
but dont lose sight of
where is it im going
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say