I am alone...

skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
you the dew...slowly awakening me
each petal in turn
before sun has begun to rise
pull me from my slumber
as you gently tickle and drop away
calling me from so far away
as each drip falls from my skin
your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
to awaken me to thoughts of you
I am alone...
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    you the dew...slowly awakening me
    each petal in turn
    before sun has begun to rise
    pull me from my slumber
    as you gently tickle and drop away
    calling me from so far away
    as each drip falls from my skin
    your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
    to awaken me to thoughts of you
    I am alone...

    sad but beautiful
    peace,
    jo

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    you the dew...slowly awakening me
    each petal in turn
    before sun has begun to rise
    pull me from my slumber
    as you gently tickle and drop away
    calling me from so far away
    as each drip falls from my skin
    your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
    to awaken me to thoughts of you
    I am alone...
    Your poem, is very beautiful, soft, gentle, peaceful. Imagery truly lovely. You are very talented Skye,
    Thank you.

    I woke up alone last weekend, well doggies were there but you know what I mean. After so many years waking beside JB it was very unsettling those first moments before my mind got it straight.

    Carried by confusion into reality, my first thoughts were filled with fear. Laying there I envisioned life without him, it felt unbearable.

    I thought of all the people across the world waking alone, perhaps for the first time, destined to turn into forever.

    Happiness is so fragile when it is based on another. This feeling has stayed with me since.

    I guess all the more reason to appreciate the love that wakes with you each day.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    you the dew...slowly awakening me
    each petal in turn
    before sun has begun to rise
    pull me from my slumber
    as you gently tickle and drop away
    calling me from so far away
    as each drip falls from my skin
    your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
    to awaken me to thoughts of you
    I am alone...

    I know what it is like to hope it was all a bad dream and then you realize you are already awake
    and alone.
    Peace
    Gayle
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    StillHere wrote:
    you the dew...slowly awakening me
    each petal in turn
    before sun has begun to rise
    pull me from my slumber
    as you gently tickle and drop away
    calling me from so far away
    as each drip falls from my skin
    your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
    to awaken me to thoughts of you
    I am alone...

    sad but beautiful

    I agree, your never alone when you have the PJ crew....us :D

    Godfather.
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    thank you everyone...you are too kind...have a wonderful day....
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    you the dew...slowly awakening me
    each petal in turn
    before sun has begun to rise
    pull me from my slumber
    as you gently tickle and drop away
    calling me from so far away
    as each drip falls from my skin
    your fingertip tracing the lines of my arm
    to awaken me to thoughts of you
    I am alone...

    sad but beautiful

    I agree, your never alone when you have the PJ crew....us :D

    Godfather.

    That's what I meant
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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