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mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What if you cannot see the forest for the trees
and one falls?
What if we cultivated wisteria and dandelions
and called orchids and roses weeds?
I am inclined to hold up a peace sign with one hand
while giving the finger with the other.
What if every act of kindness
generated two acts of kindness?
Eventually every act of evil would be forgiven.
Because
Does the universe not have to sort out the same for all
. . .or not at all?
the same for every soul that has ever existed
or has the soul itself ever existed
at all?
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Now that was awesome.

    I think I would like to attempt to answer sum or one or some of those.
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    Love the blending of two known expressions (also the synesthesia of senses) creating something unique in the first couple lines. Bad ass!
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    nice.
    i am liking your writing.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    eyedclaar wrote:
    Love the blending of two known expressions (also the synesthesia of senses) creating something unique in the first couple lines. Bad ass!

    OK, I know what bad ass means
    such high praise
    I am honored and humbled
    (even if I did have to look up synesthesia)

    evolution of the soul has been my most intense mind blowing, head spinning, wonderment barely edging out evolution of the universe
    and baby, there are so many wonderments
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    lettinggo wrote:
    eyedclaar wrote:
    Love the blending of two known expressions (also the synesthesia of senses) creating something unique in the first couple lines. Bad ass!

    OK, I know what bad ass means
    such high praise
    I am honored and humbled
    (even if I did have to look up synesthesia)

    evolution of the soul has been my most intense mind blowing, head spinning, wonderment barely edging out evolution of the universe
    and baby, there are so many wonderments

    Please bare all your theories/knowledge of this wonderment that you dare to care share
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    DangDang wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    eyedclaar wrote:
    Love the blending of two known expressions (also the synesthesia of senses) creating something unique in the first couple lines. Bad ass!

    OK, I know what bad ass means
    such high praise
    I am honored and humbled
    (even if I did have to look up synesthesia)

    evolution of the soul has been my most intense mind blowing, head spinning, wonderment barely edging out evolution of the universe
    and baby, there are so many wonderments

    Please bare all your theories/knowledge of this wonderment that you dare to care share

    be very careful what you wish for, dd
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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