Bizarre obstacle course

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
Bizarre obstacle course

Moving from here to there
down at this point
work is time

So small but scurrying along
no problem
just living little

Music towers
I just can’t believe your disorder and destruction
as you touch the windowsill of boulders and shells

This is where the yellow and red glass is warmest or crying cold
I just can’t understand this border
seeing through limitations pane

From here where it shines
just let me jump down onto this bench
running the length all day
admiring ashtrays along the way like charred safari

To me the giant spinning wind
smells like plastic

Moving to the floor
cigarette butts riddle the freeway of design
I do rest on them as I smoke my squares and fags

Why the nicotine fit of pollution?

As I cough forward and out of air
the landfill opens up before me
envelopes of careless mail everywhere
addressed and stamped for global earth sending and receiving
so many bury me alive
till choking

Some of this paperwork is largely written
like cave drawings that inspired the night
as savages raped the beasts

In the darkness
cloth hangs from what seems to be
upright cotton fields
kept behind doors and walls forever

Dust
I cannot believe the fallout and mites
running out of time with the captain

And with the captain
I sailed over entire continents of wet towels
and soiled garments

Dirty jeans and underwear mountain
are always the peeks where we would land
and you could smell her body quiver
like a dove on wind

We would claim this range before the cleansing
then in the instant passing of a few days time
it would all be taken away
slowly replaced by new structure
always moist and filthy

More blankets overhead gather around her
she must be dreaming while I am down here alive
because I continue to roam her slumbering body as I discover utopia
and yet she has nothing of expression to share

And now looking over
the ever changing green numbers change every minute
every hour
and I cannot think that way
I was not designed to yield to this guidance of buzzing
yet she sleeps inside the clocks of sky

But it isn’t through this roof
where paint has art
it is all around
and the paperclip holds his poetry like a brick
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    edited October 2010
    chadwick wrote:
    Bizarre obstacle course

    Moving from here to there
    down at this point
    work is time

    So small but scurrying along
    no problem
    just living little

    Music towers
    I just can’t believe your disorder and destruction
    as you touch the windowsill of boulders and shells

    This is where the yellow and red glass is warmest or crying cold
    I just can’t understand this border
    seeing through limitations pane

    From here where it shines
    just let me jump down onto this bench
    running the length all day
    admiring ashtrays along the way like charred safari

    To me the giant spinning wind
    smells like plastic

    Moving to the floor
    cigarette butts riddle the freeway of design
    I do rest on them as I smoke my squares and fags

    Why the nicotine fit of pollution?

    As I cough forward and out of air
    the landfill opens up before me
    envelopes of careless mail everywhere
    addressed and stamped for global earth sending and receiving
    so many bury me alive
    till choking

    Some of this paperwork is largely written
    like cave drawings that inspired the night
    as savages raped the beasts

    In the darkness
    cloth hangs from what seems to be
    upright cotton fields
    kept behind doors and walls forever

    Dust
    I cannot believe the fallout and mites
    running out of time with the captain

    And with the captain
    I sailed over entire continents of wet towels
    and soiled garments

    Dirty jeans and underwear mountain
    are always the peeks where we would land
    and you could smell her body quiver
    like a dove on wind

    We would claim this range before the cleansing
    then in the instant passing of a few days time
    it would all be taken away
    slowly replaced by new structure
    always moist and filthy

    More blankets overhead gather around her
    she must be dreaming while I am down here alive
    because I continue to roam her slumbering body as I discover utopia
    and yet she has nothing of expression to share

    And now looking over
    the ever changing green numbers change every minute
    every hour
    and I cannot think that way
    I was not designed to yield to this guidance of buzzing
    yet she sleeps inside the clocks of sky

    But it isn’t through this roof
    where paint has art
    it is all around
    and the paperclip holds his poetry like a brick

    :thumbup:
    Post edited by DangDang on
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    To me, this is a two trip piece
    I love them both, cw
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    This is very different Chad, I like it. Thank you for sharing...
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    very cool Chadwick.

    i love how you end it also...

    "But it isn’t through this roof
    where paint has art
    it is all around
    and the paperclip holds his poetry like a brick"

    awesome.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.

    sometimes cluster fucks can be good.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.

    sometimes cluster fucks can be good.

    see my buddy here
    he got some pretty decent hash
    i then became the vice president of the dazed & fucked committee for about 5 days

    staring at the floor was never so much fun
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.

    sometimes cluster fucks can be good.

    see my buddy here
    he got some pretty decent hash
    i then became the vice president of the dazed & fucked committee for about 5 days

    staring at the floor was never so much fun

    :crazy: :wtf: :clap:
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.

    sometimes cluster fucks can be good.

    see my buddy here
    he got some pretty decent hash
    i then became the vice president of the dazed & fucked committee for about 5 days

    staring at the floor was never so much fun

    been there . . .
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    lettinggo wrote:
    been there . . .
    i live for writing when i'm torn.
    oddly enough, i'm surprised i'm not a severe drug addict/alcoholic.
    i enjoy writing when im high.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow.....very cool I almost had a flash back.

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Godfather. wrote:
    wow.....very cool I almost had a flash back.

    Godfather.
    :lol:
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    i am sure it is a cluster fuck.
    i don't even remember writing it.

    thank you everyone for reading it and giving feedback.

    sometimes cluster fucks can be good.

    see my buddy here
    he got some pretty decent hash
    i then became the vice president of the dazed & fucked committee for about 5 days

    staring at the floor was never so much fun

    It is good to have friends in high places
    :D
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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