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the silent tower

jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Take a dive into dreams
Feel the fire burn inside
Let the spirit slowly grow
Divide.

Swim within revelation
Experience sweet creation
Locked in a tower
Built tall reflecting devastation

Tear it down
Tear it down

Awake to silence
Not for long.
Hear the world sing its song
Rebirth
New life
From the ashes of the fallen
Arise a new tower of inspiration.
<b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    if i remember correctly, you're in a band right?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    jfs5-10-10 wrote:
    Take a dive into dreams
    Feel the fire burn inside
    Let the spirit slowly grow
    Divide.

    Swim within revelation
    Experience sweet creation
    Locked in a tower
    Built tall reflecting devastation

    Tear it down
    Tear it down

    Awake to silence
    Not for long.
    Hear the world sing its song
    Rebirth
    New life
    From the ashes of the fallen
    Arise a new tower of inspiration.

    I like it :)
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
    chadwick wrote:
    if i remember correctly, you're in a band right?

    Nope. Just solo. I play guitar, bass, keys, ukulele, I sing. Self taught, practice everyday.
    I would love to be in a band one day, not much time for it at the moment though working full time.

    I'm actually working on a slow version of Got Some at the moment which is sounding nice so far.
    Inspired by Lukin II. =)
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

    Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    jfs5-10-10 wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    if i remember correctly, you're in a band right?

    Nope. Just solo. I play guitar, bass, keys, ukulele, I sing. Self taught, practice everyday.
    I would love to be in a band one day, not much time for it at the moment though working full time.

    I'm actually working on a slow version of Got Some at the moment which is sounding nice so far.
    Inspired by Lukin II. =)
    Wow, I for one would like to hear that, Got Some is a favorite. Very nice poem too, I like it. Good luck with your music.
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