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what should probably be a diary entry

skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the colors people show...
their very own true colors
saddens me to no end
you can not hide who you are
as hard as you might try
you are you
I am I
I shan't hide myself
but I hope when you look in the mirror
you see yourself in your very own colors
to those of you that shine light and love
even on the darkest days
even if you can't see it ...others do see your beauty
those of you who hide behind facades of goodness
others see that also...your wickedness...
you are you
I am I


to the man I love...this is NOT for you...you will only ever shine goodness and light to me...
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  • embraceembrace Posts: 849
    I love reading your words - thank you :)
    got a car...got some gas...oh let's get out of here-get out of here fast...
    I hope you get this message but your not home...I will be there in just a minute or so...
    I want to go but I want to go with you.

    Travel is fatal to prejudice, bigotry and narrow-mindedness and many of our people need it sorely on these accounts. Broad, wholesome, charitable views of men and things cannot be acquired by vegetating in one little corner of the earth all one's lifetime. -MT

    I've had enough, said enough, felt enough. I'm fine, still in it.
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    :clap:
    Awesome sky !
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i don't even know what to say.

    sitting here
    i just wanna relax...
    and dwell in your poem.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    I like the title... and being wicked. ;)
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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    You love him from afar
    and you say that's who you are
    yet miraculous reflections
    are surely nothing more
    How can we ever get beyond this
    Narcissus in the lake,
    when every pale reflection
    is begging to forsake
    What we thought we knew all along
    yet could never be quite sure -
    To be perpetually reminded
    of what has gone before
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    This is lovely .... hoping one shows their true colors.
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  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    thank you everyone for the kind words....
    eyedclaar wrote:
    I like the title... and being wicked. ;)
    for you I wanted to find a smacking emoticon but couldn't.... :lol: ....so let's just pretend :lol:
    tremors wrote:
    You love him from afar
    and you say that's who you are
    yet miraculous reflections
    are surely nothing more
    How can we ever get beyond this
    Narcissus in the lake,
    when every pale reflection
    is begging to forsake
    What we thought we knew all along
    yet could never be quite sure -
    To be perpetually reminded
    of what has gone before

    your words are lovely but I am not sure you understand exactly...or maybe you do perfectly...I don't know...I really don't know you that well... :)
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    that was a right answer! we only know each other this well.

    you know i always love your words skye, but our life is more than words, the gulf that cuts into our chest, maybe that means 'strangers', where the warm glow beating in our breast that means 'intimates'

    it's always the strangers who are safer and can hurt you less.

    a convoluted way of saying 'great poems srw' and 'i'm bleary at this time of the morning, i need my porridge!'
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  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Beautiful, and thank you so much for sharing...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow you nailed it..you nailed life, outstanding !

    Godfather.
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