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Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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I knew it all along, see?
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i love you, man
    glad to see you and your writing again.
    well done.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
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    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    johnny america wrote:
    dear chadwick,

    thick humid days and
    beds of nails
    could not keep me
    from biting

    the hooks
    through my lips

    i tipped an entire flagpole over
    and found my blanket on the ground

    it was time
    it was time
    it was time
    you rock.

    "i tipped an entire flagpole over
    and found my blanket on the ground"... mr. j america.

    i love this line of yours..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    very nice

    makes me think

    thanks for sharing :)
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    StillHere wrote:
    very nice

    makes me think

    thanks for sharing :)


    Does it make you think of bananas? Fish? Trees? The long-dead emperors of Asia?
    I knew it all along, see?
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    johnny america wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    very nice

    makes me think

    thanks for sharing :)


    Does it make you think of bananas? Fish? Trees? The long-dead emperors of Asia?

    not exactly mr. america...
    of course i haven't the slightest notion of what you intended it to provoke in a person, if anything, but I'll tell you what it makes me think about......not bananas, fish, trees, dead kings or the like...actually..it makes me think more along the lines of the frailty of life and how we take it for granted through all the peril that lurks randomly, just out of view, all around us each day, and how we don't come to recognize the little things in our lives that could mean so much to us if we just noticed that they were there.
    that's what it makes me think about.
    thank you sir.
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    Thaaaank YOU!
    I knew it all along, see?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Another interesting one from johnny a. :)

    Where have you been for all these months?
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    Holy moly, Johnny America. One of my favorite weirdos... Good stuff as always. Been fighting crime?
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  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    eyedclaar wrote:
    Holy moly, Johnny America. One of my favorite weirdos... Good stuff as always. Been fighting crime?

    Making a difference in the community.
    I knew it all along, see?
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    very sad and very good
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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