echoes through time

skyeriverwinter
skyeriverwinter Posts: 1,902
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
every hug, every kiss, every sneeze, every slap ...echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching
love given, love taken, hatred shown, hatred hidden... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
every gentle step placed, every foot stomped, every whisper... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
every prayer said, every tear shed, every thought spent... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
every question asked, every answer given, a truth or a lie... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
burdens carried, burdens given, goodness and cruelty... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching
bouncing back and forth through time... rolling like waves... echoes through time
a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    every hug, every kiss, every sneeze, every slap ...echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching
    love given, love taken, hatred shown, hatred hidden... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
    every gentle step placed, every foot stomped, every whisper... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
    every prayer said, every tear given, every thought spent... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
    every question asked, every answer given, a truth or a lie... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching...stretching
    burdens carried, burdens given, goodness and cruelty... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching
    bouncing back and forth through time... rolling like waves... echoes through time
    a ripple caused never ending outward reaching... stretching

    this is huge stuff.
    i'll have to reread it many times
    im still waking up

    thank you for your work...
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    Thank you for sharing.
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  • skyeriverwinter
    skyeriverwinter Posts: 1,902
    I just reread this and realized...IT SUCKS!!! :lol::lol: I am s sorry to anyone who took the time to read it...it is torture but I shan't delete...I know how others feel about that...but maybe you may want me to with this crap!!! :lol::lol:
  • eyedclaar
    eyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    I just reread this and realized...IT SUCKS!!! :lol::lol: I am s sorry to anyone who took the time to read it...it is torture but I shan't delete...I know how others feel about that...but maybe you may want me to with this crap!!! :lol::lol:

    Glad that doesn't happen to just me when I look back at certain pieces. I'm not gonna charge you for my time or anything... :lol: It wasn't that bad.
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  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    I must know nothing ( no snide remarks now ;) ) I liked it :)
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    I want to delete about 97.99999 % of all that I post when I look at it the next day. lol.

    this is not bad though sky.
    Peace, Love.

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    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i hate almost every single thing i have ever wrote.
    in fact, i am an idiot.

    this is not bad poetry.

    ok, hate is a strong word...
    i have boxes of terrible poetry.
    i should light them on fire outback.
    but because i suck i am keeping the shit.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    i hate almost every single thing i have ever wrote.
    in fact, i am an idiot.

    this is not bad poetry.

    ok, hate is a strong word...
    i have boxes of terrible poetry.
    i should light them on fire outback.
    but because i suck i am keeping the shit.


    ahh, i have done this before..... thrown whole notebooks in the fire.....
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    i hate almost every single thing i have ever wrote.
    in fact, i am an idiot.

    this is not bad poetry.

    ok, hate is a strong word...
    i have boxes of terrible poetry.
    i should light them on fire outback.
    but because i suck i am keeping the shit.


    ahh, i have done this before..... thrown whole notebooks in the fire.....
    no you have not, now stop it :) :twisted: :shock: :oops: :lolno: :sick: :think: :thumbdown: :wtf:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i can see doing this if you were tasting spells out in the woods
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • runaway
    runaway Posts: 427
    wooden spoons, belt whips on bare ass, slapped across the face, soap in the mouth....fun shit to remember...life goes on....or so I have heard
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  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    pandora wrote:
    I must know nothing ( no snide remarks now ;) ) I liked it :)

    As must I (neither will I) and as did I.
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"

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