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the wolf
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blood falls from my hand
to the grass
now barren land
its time
living cursed
to restlessly wander the earth
the mark will be worn
for all to see
none shall seek revenge
for fear of vengeance seven times more
my brothers keeper?
I am not
the soil screams out
the blood of the favored one
will forever follow me
into the Land of Nod
I seek death but am denied
the soul of man
to be destroyed by my hand
harbinger of death
feel my fear
taste the flame
I’ll wear this mark
as my crusade begins
to end mankind.
to the grass
now barren land
its time
living cursed
to restlessly wander the earth
the mark will be worn
for all to see
none shall seek revenge
for fear of vengeance seven times more
my brothers keeper?
I am not
the soil screams out
the blood of the favored one
will forever follow me
into the Land of Nod
I seek death but am denied
the soul of man
to be destroyed by my hand
harbinger of death
feel my fear
taste the flame
I’ll wear this mark
as my crusade begins
to end mankind.
Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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A predictor; a soothsayer.
although grim....forbidding
as always beautifully written to move emotion
Fear gripped her soul as she walked
through the lonely town
Friends were nowhere to be found
She did not agree with the spiritual ways of her youth
Was this the fate for a non conformist?
The woman whispered a short prayer
hoping to understand the meaning
Everything was calm and serene
She was enveloped in some sort of grace
Something she didn't think possible
It was true to her now,'
a spirital connection is all that is needed
hope this helps....
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I fell asleep last night and had a dream maybe,.. ? I don't know.
I woke up at 2:30 in the morning and had one line repeating in my head over and over..
I couldn't fall back asleep. I just had the one line, and knew that it was from the perspective of Cain after killing Abel.
I'm not even sure I believe in the story of Cain and Abel, but the perspective was strong, so I did the best I could with the little knowledge I had on the subject.
I don't usually explain the things I write here, but felt the need to share how this came to be.
Thanks for reading.
-steve
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
Thank you for sending the story behind the poem. I love knowing what inspires a poem. Thank you.
Thank you mikalina. Don't get used to it,... I usually won't talk about the meanings. unless it's quiet, one on one, and over a beer.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
What's that supposed to mean?
Nice job on this one. Cain and I would have got along famously...
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not like THAT ! lol i wasn't even thinking. that does read pretty bad,... :oops:
thanks eyed.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
love it
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