Locked in a box

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Locked in a box
it's that bad
to be stuck in an old opinion
childish ideas
I'd so much rather be in a new opinion
not stuffed in a moldy ol' drawer
like that dusty broken book I read and reread years ago
or that depressing old play the kids on my block played?
what about some new stories?
what about a better ending?
who wants to stay locked up?!
bored, angry, WRONG (!)
locked in a box
when I don't wanna be in one
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    agreed.
    we have the key though, yeah ? ;)
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • runaway
    runaway Posts: 427
    I knew I misplaced my ashtray when I left it there...where are you in lIfe?
    I'm cruising...riding....the BIG mofo wave
    hang tight .....it'll be alright
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    runaway wrote:
    I knew I misplaced my ashtray when I left it there...where are you in lIfe?
    I'm cruising...riding....the BIG mofo wave
    hang tight .....it'll be alright
    :?:
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nicely done, justly.
    thank you.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Nicely done!! There are days I can really relate to your poem...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • runaway
    runaway Posts: 427
    belief systems sometimes need to be broken....ally's calling
    don't lie awake at night with your thoughts in mind
    start breathing in and out with your toes first
    think what you want .....toes should be relaxed, the mind follows afterward
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar

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