Biodomes

eyedclaar

Biodomes

Outside the two by four
Sheetrock and glass
Above the choking asphalt
And toxic runoff
Beyond the paychecks
Debt collectors and
Cold comfort cycles
There are genuine moments
Of worry and wonder
Where blizzards deposit
Equal amounts
Of ivory enchantment
And drawn out agony

A split second stare
Into unending amber beauty
Sitting atop the smiling
And salivating
Stalactites to the underworld

So much life
Crying our names
From amongst the ruins
Of conquered kingdoms
At least
More invitation
Than can be found
In this manicured park
Of crowded coffins
And plastic flowers

That much is certain

chadwick

that aint no shit.
as time goes on i wish for time to go back at least 3,000 years or more.

but i still want the internet in my stick shelter.

DopeBeastie

couchy stalactites
graviteee
is that you, Amber?
I cannot see

the wolf

I don't know how the hell I missed this eyed. Shit sure don't stay up top long these days.

I really dig it though, glad I found it.

thanks.

runaway

sublime

eyedclaar

the wolf wrote:

I don't know how the hell I missed this eyed. Shit sure don't stay up top long these days.

I really dig it though, glad I found it.

thanks.

Thanks, man. I was actually really happy with this stanza; one of my favorites that this feeble brain has managed come up with...

A split second stare
Into unending amber beauty
Sitting atop the smiling
And salivating
Stalactites to the underworld

runaway

eyedclaar wrote:

the wolf wrote:

I don't know how the hell I missed this eyed. Shit sure don't stay up top long these days.

I really dig it though, glad I found it.

thanks.

Thanks, man. I was actually really happy with this stanza; one of my favorites that this feeble brain has managed come up with...

A split second stare
Into unending amber beauty
Sitting atop the smiling
And salivating
Stalactites to the underworld

stalagtites or stalagmites...stalagcities....minds a blowin!!!